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Prompt #7: Days

Feb 09, 2010 22:22

Title: Mimicry
Fandom: SHINee
Characters: Kim Kibum, Kim Jonghyun
Prompt: Days
Word Count: 683
Rating: R
Summary: Curiosity kills
Author's Notes: Admittedly, this one sits a little .. I'm not sure how I feel about this. I don't think it's bad, or anything like that, but it's ... Darker than the rest. I guess that's all I really have to say.

( Too smart for his own good, he’s always been impulsive, rash. He’ll regret what he does if he acts now. )

shining shinee, jongkey, fanfiction

Comments 43

blingasaurus February 10 2010, 03:31:54 UTC

omg i had a feeling i knew what was coming whenever i read the first little bit but i'm still just sitting here like D: D: D: omg.

this is written really, really well, though. it's really well done. but i just can't help feeling bad for kibum because sldkjdfklg i expected jonghyun to at least kill him first D:

um, yes, kibum really got fucked here. like, really. like, i'm still just like OMG JJONG HOW COULD YOU. but at the same time i can actually maybe see him doing this in some weird twisted universe. :|

ANYWAYS THE BOTTOM LINE IS THAT THIS IS REALLY GOOD AS ALWAYS ♥

hyungwhore February 10 2010, 03:43:59 UTC

Dude, I wrote this hours ago and I'm still sitting here like D:D:D:D:D:.

Really..? Because, to me, this is such a weakly written piece. I dunno. It seems repetitive to me, and, idk. I'm such a perfectionist. I should be like this in all aspects of my life

I debated a lot over the end. I was really torn between the way it ended, and having Jonghyun just kill him. I'm glad it ended the way it did, though. I think it's better like this. AND NOW DO YOU SEE WHY I WAS ALL ANGANG EARLIER ABOUT THIS?? I know Kibum has been an assssss in previous fics, but I'm not sure he deserved to get fucked quite this hardcore. But, ehh, Jjong did it. rofl Jjong actually plays this sort of crazy really really really well I sorta like it and want to do it again but I feel like I should write something fluffy after this shit

OMG ILU FOR SAYING THAT BB T.T

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soasian101 February 10 2010, 04:49:31 UTC

DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:

THIS FIC WILL TURN PEOPLE VEGETARIAN OH MY GOD.

But in a great way? Haha~ I loved how you wrote it even though my stomach was already sick to begin with~ I thought the cutting his own leg thing was pretty interesting though. If it already tastes bad before, why try again? Like me with alcohol and ginger.

I like sashimi though. Kay.

hyungwhore February 10 2010, 05:03:22 UTC

I'M GLAD OTHER PEOPLE ARE AS DISTURBED READING THIS AS I WAS WRITING IT. rly

I hope I don't make anyone actually sick with anything that I write. Yet, at the same time, that sort of a response is sort of ... amazing, to me as a writer, because that means I did something right, if I'm getting that much of a reaction. lmfao And, Jjong tried it again because he figured his problem was that he just couldn't stomach eating himself. I mean. He's fucked up in this, clearly.

lmfao How about Kibum sashimi? never mind that he's not a fish so he can't be a raw fish and sorry if that was way disturbing I'm really not as bad as my fics make me seem I swear

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hyungwhore February 10 2010, 05:07:05 UTC

(OT but I love your icon, especially because Jinki is lurking back there like Eeteuk a boss.)

Sometimes I think that people just don't understand how weird fluff is for me to write. It's not that it's something I don't enjoy, and it's not something that I'm terrible at, if I put my mind to it. It's just that things like this come to me effortlessly. This I can sit down and write in ten minutes, whereas anything fluffy takes me so long to figure out how to do.

All of your praise really, really makes me happy. I can't ever seem to find the right words to express how happy I am when someone leaves me a praising comment. It's something that gives me such a moral boost, and they're always helpful, to boot. It lets me know what works, and makes me question other parts of the piece in question. All in all, I love it. ^^

Sooooo. Thank you so much for taking the time to read this, and to comment!! I appreciate it so very much!!!

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hyungwhore February 10 2010, 05:10:11 UTC

Clearly this will go down as my most shocking piece. I wonder if I can make something even worse in terms of content not style.

Thank you for taking the time to read this. It's trite and I say it to everyone, but it never means any less than it did before. (I feel like I have to respond without my usual silliness because it seems like you took this fic rather seriously.)

xxqod February 10 2010, 06:30:23 UTC

GOREEEEEE!!!!!!
Ah, you satisfied my needs xD

I'm still thinking about that other one with Kibum and gah!
This is so sweet! ^^
I knew Jonghyun liked to bite stuff xD
Even if they're persons! :D

And omfg! >.<
Of course you don't like your own skin/meat/blood, that one I do like
That of another, especially in the form of Kibum tastes way better!

So sadistic of Jonghyun to let Kibum know what's going to happen to him.
And I love the subtleness of the blood staining on Jjong's pants, like indicating the wound re-opened.

Maybe he should try Kibum with a few slices of lemon.

Gah! xDDDD
-happy-
<3 ~~

hyungwhore February 10 2010, 22:05:51 UTC

lmfao I don't even know what to make of your comment bb. There's so much to it!!

I felt like I had to make Kibum still alive for everything, because it just seems infinitely more realistic to me. And, apparently, that's how it happens. ^^

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