Comments | i_17bingo: LJ Idol, Season 10 Second Chance, Week 2: Front Porch

i_17bingo

LJ Idol, Season 10 Second Chance, Week 2: Front Porch

Mar 12, 2017 16:51

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lj-idol, fantasy, writing, rafaela

Comments 23

d0gs March 13 2017, 03:08:13 UTC

i loveee this! werewolves are my favourites :D

i_17bingo March 13 2017, 18:05:43 UTC

Jim says that is definitely a bear.

bleodswean March 13 2017, 15:03:10 UTC

This was FUN! I love the droll and dry humour of the piece - bravo on nailing that! The slow-motion fight between the werewolf and Rafaela was pure cinema!

i_17bingo March 13 2017, 18:10:54 UTC

Thanks! It took a lot of work to simplify my writing to match Jim and Bill, and I'm glad it paid off.

banana_galaxy March 13 2017, 17:41:55 UTC

I loved that you told this from the perspective of Jim and Bill. It added some fun flavour that I sincerely enjoyed.

i_17bingo March 13 2017, 18:11:55 UTC

It was fun to look at it from a different perspective. If I'm going to keep telling these fantasy stories, I might as well throw in a little variety.

rayaso March 14 2017, 12:58:29 UTC

This was great! I loved the perspective of the two old codgers. When it comes to coots v. werewolves, my money's on the one with the shotgun. Excellent story.

i_17bingo March 14 2017, 14:44:15 UTC

I feel like I missed a chance for someone to yell "Get off my lawn!"

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i_17bingo March 14 2017, 20:17:13 UTC

So would I! If I stay in the contest, we just might find out. (I bet it was swamp creatures.)