This was fun! I love seeing this sort of battle from an outside perspective. I also like that you kept the mood light, even at the end when it seemed like it would turn darker.
I like how little you need to do to keep this wrapped around the characters you use regularly. You've been building it and running it long enough that you can make occasion to do things like this:
“Why not?” Jim insisted. “Bears walk on two legs.”
“Only sometimes,” Bill countered. “Like when they're mad.”
Which is phenomenal and allows for some pretty cool external insight into what Rafaela has to live with on the regular.
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“Why not?” Jim insisted. “Bears walk on two legs.”
“Only sometimes,” Bill countered. “Like when they're mad.”
Which is phenomenal and allows for some pretty cool external insight into what Rafaela has to live with on the regular.
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