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aresrising05 March 19 2017, 15:24:11 UTC
The incongruity of it was quite funny.

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i_17bingo March 19 2017, 19:55:08 UTC
Yeah, the contrasts between the real world and the magical world are places I like to mine when I'm having fun writing.

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penpusher March 19 2017, 15:44:17 UTC
What a fun and charming tale, love the banter of the two old gents and the ending was a socko surprise!

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i_17bingo March 19 2017, 19:56:21 UTC
You mean the shooting? I wasn't actually sure it was going to happen. I didn't want to bum the audience out.

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