LJ Idol, Season 10 Week 16: Thunderclap

[i_17bingo]

Comments

[banana_galaxy]

This was cool. Invisible nasties must be some of the hardest to get rid of.

[i_17bingo]

Cockroaches are the hardest to get rid of, but invisible nasties are definitely second.

[rayaso]

. . . and then there are the invisible cockroaches!

[penpusher]

Hilarious and tremendous! loved the "Ronnie Yazzie's (no relation to Becky)" and the repetition of the skinwalker inquiries. Victor always takes things in stride.

[i_17bingo]

Yeah, but you can tell he's at the end of his rope.

[i_17bingo]

I grew up with them, and they scared the bejesus out of me. It's a good thing Victor isn't one.

[rayaso]

This was definitely fun and interesting to read! Those spectral bullets must have seriously hurt. What was going on here? The whole area seems to have a second population of spirit beings. Victor may not have been a skinwalker, but he was good at evictions.

[i_17bingo]

I can't imagine how much those spectral bullets hurt. I'm frankly surprised that's the first time the ghost cowboys used them.

[bewize]

This was a great read. I loved the end, especially!

[i_17bingo]

Thanks! It was a lot of fun to write.