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messygorgeous July 7 2017, 05:08:03 UTC
I really enjoyed the Looney Tunes references but you stole my heart with Friday I'm in Love and OMG The Lady in Red.

I think YOU are the trickster god. I always love the humor and mythos is your stories.

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i_17bingo July 7 2017, 12:52:23 UTC
Oh, wow! That is so kind of you to say!

There was a period of my life I was absolutely dying to be a trickster god, but I realized after some study that there is more darkness in them than I'm willing to take on. I'll settle for making people laugh.

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marlawentmad July 7 2017, 05:58:16 UTC

This is so delightful!
This line stopped me in my tracks, "If blushing were a sound, Rafaela would have deafened the room." Man, do I know that sound!
I love the slapstick nature of the trickster scuffle, and the ending is just perfect resigned hilarity.

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i_17bingo July 7 2017, 12:47:58 UTC
"Resigned" is the perfect word for it, isn't it? That's what I was going for, but I didn't have a description of it. Thanks for helping me out with that!

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ryl July 8 2017, 18:06:01 UTC
When you dress like a glittery carrot, you have to expect Bugs Bunny to show up. ;) I always thought Bugs should have been a fox.

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i_17bingo July 9 2017, 10:24:55 UTC
I don't know if you knew this, but Bugs is based on the Native American Coyote, a powerful trickster. Not quite a fox, but really close.

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swirlsofblue July 9 2017, 07:56:29 UTC
Fun story, I like the way it started so cute and sweet and turned darker and then ended on that lovely sweet note.

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i_17bingo July 9 2017, 10:22:47 UTC
I wanted to end it with a good feeling, so I apparently did my job. Thanks!

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rayaso July 9 2017, 17:36:20 UTC
So creative! The prom turned into a trickster fable/cartoon mash, which was really funny. When someone says "I thought you were human," "we'll talk about it later" is probably not the response she was hoping for. "I look like a glittery carrot that somebody painted a face on" was a great line, and so accurate!

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i_17bingo July 9 2017, 18:43:59 UTC
I have to wonder what response she was looking for to that declaration.

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