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[i_needmy_specks]

The door opened slowly. He walked in. Her boyfriend. That low-life, good for nothing, piece of shit boyfriend. I thought so lowly of him, because in all honesty, I was jealous. In all honesty, I was envious of him. Envious of that disgusting, low-life, who just walked in the door

Comments

[ifnotwinter]

i think that what she says needs to be more pressing and more powerful.
but
i ike the story still

[i_needmy_specks]

i know it needs to be more powerful...but what would she say? what could she say. maybe if she didn't say anything at all..i don't know.

[whodoyoothinkur]

It all depends on how you read it.

I like it.

Anthony, marry me, make me rich and famous. We'll be struggling artists.