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[i_speak_lyric]

"i'm trying to find truth
in words, in rhymes, in notes
in all the things i wish i'd wrote
cause i feel like i've been losing you
each night it ends too soon
you don't hold me like you used to
and your eyes look like they've seen too much
its always some excuse
too tired, too obtuse
you look so far removed
this time i fear i'm losing you"

Comments

[elledork7]

I really like those pictures; I love shoes.

[i_speak_lyric]

Yes, thank you. They photograph beautifully.

[elledork7]

Oh, yes.

[elledork7]

p.s. I really love your icon. I am very curious, also.

hey

[dumb_ass123]

those are my shoes. im soo proud of thme, to bad they will never live again,
the format are an amazing band.
i will miss those days....
haley it takes 31 min to get to my dads,,, plzzz come
i really want you to.. plz plz plz
its not that long
its gonna be the last time i will seen u before u go away for camp for a month
i really want you to come, plz plz
i will go to ur place if u dont want to come here..
do it for me..
think about it darling
i love you

Re: hey

[i_speak_lyric]

I'm not that easy.

[mucho_love]

Awesssssssssommmmmmmmmmmeeeeeee!!!

converses and cow boy boots are hott!!

[i_speak_lyric]

Long time no comment, Tati. Thanks.

my only good poem

[handyman123]

Poppy tell if u like my poem..........

My shadow
By Taunto Gray

There's a shadow just behind me,
Shrouding every step I take,
Making every promise empty,
Pointing every finger at me.
Waiting like a stalking butler,
Who upon the finger rests?
Murder now the path called must we,
Just because the son has come.
Why can't we not be sober
Just want to start this over.
Why can't we drink forever
I just want to start things over.
My compassion is broken now.
My will is eroded now,
and my desire is broken now
and it makes me feel ugly.
I'm on my knees and burning.
My shadow and moans are the fuel that,
set my head on fire.
So smell my soul is burning.
I'm broken, looking up to see the shadow.
And I have swallowed the poison you feed me...
but I survive on it, and it leaves me
guilt, fades
hatred fades
weakness fades
the shadow fades
and i can see my life
the shadow left me......
it left me to die

Re: my only good poem

[handyman123]

your poem is awseome, but like since ur a guy it's sounds like ur all "gay"

Re: my only good poem

[tylorsbabyhaley]

that poem is amazing michael

you are really talented

you should write some more

Re: my only good poem

[i_speak_lyric]

Taunto, I love it. To me, a true genius is someone who can put what they are trying to say into beautiful and meaningful words. Your poem is understandable, and puts a vivid image in my mind. I don't think that it makes you seem "gay". If I didn't know you and I read your poem, I would believe the author is sentimental and intelligent. I obviously agree with Sam; you're very talented.

[idahopotato_1o1]

hey call me (916)289-4981. i haven't talked to you in a while