South Park: The Care and Keeping of Turds (30_tears prompt #13)

[i_washere]

South Park
The Care and Keeping of Turds
Prompt #13, "A Knife to the Heart"
PG (language)
1,697 words
Approx Age: 12

When Stan and Kyle get into a terrible fight, Kyle finds comfort from a most unexpected source.

Comments

[atomichyperwave]

Aww, that was cute. <3
Though comforting Shelly was a bit... different. You still made her pretty in character, which is cool. :3

[crushedmidnight]

Yeah, Shelley being nice is something that probably wouldn't happen on the series now, but since the boys are 12 here, she's 17/18ish, and hopefully just a bit nicer... maybe... haha. Thanks for reviewing!

[blackeyedwicca]

I really liked this ^^

Having Shelley be the comforter was awesome :D

Great job!!

[crushedmidnight]

Thank you! :)

[blackeyedwicca]

No Problemo ^^

[sekrit_omg]

The fact that you're writing 30 snippets about crying is awesome. Awesome. Crying is awesome. And the fact that you can make it fit these characters 30 times is impressive.

I should think about doing one of these prompts.

[crushedmidnight]

Thank you! You definitely should check it out: 30_tears. But allow me to correct you... it will be impressive, if I manage to finish it! Haha. I, too, am a sucker for crying, especially males crying, so I thought 30 scenarios would be no big deal. It's harder than it looks, though! Haha. But you should definitely check it out. It's a very laid-back com.

[doily_fic]

*sniffles* Gah, man...I like Shelley when she's helpful, bitchy, but helpful. the reluctant sister.

Well done, excellent characterization.

[crushedmidnight]

Many thanks! :D

[eelectric_diva]

lol
that 'shut up turd' line cracked me up, when she first showed her self!