Alice's Game

[i_write_vamps]

Alice’s Game

“You lose,”

No sooner had the words left the beautiful woman’s wine red lips her long, elegant fingers seized hold of her opponent’s doublet, dragging him across the table to where she sat. Her free hand ripped open his vest and his doughy flesh yielded beneath to pressure of her fingernails. Her fingers sank into the hot, steaming

Comments

[mumsisdaughter]

Oo-er. Creepy yet fascinating. I like it. Is there more?

[i_write_vamps]

Thanks!! No, there isn't anymore so far, I've been kind of dry lately. :( But Julian has been hanging around, I hope he lets me write more for him soon!

[boondockschic]

oh man, this is awesome! from the beginning i couldn't stop reading. a job well done my friend, a job well done. if you produce this into a story, i would so want to read it. i'm currently not into the whole vampire thing (i don't know if they're vampires or not...i think they are since alice was drinking blood) but if it is and if you produce more from this one-shot i would truly love to read it. you're such an awesome writer and i'm happy that you're willing to share your creativity. ^.^

[i_write_vamps]

Thanks, Jordan!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. :) I really enjoy writing for that particular character (Julian). Alice has been hovering around for years... she really only had one story written for her prior to this one, and just wanted a little attention, apparently. :P I've written a lot of stories about Julian, one in particular that I am quite proud of, and I just might post it on here if he gets his way. ;)