White Collar Fic: The Leap Part 8

[iamhere23]

Title: The Leap
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Comments

[micheleeeex]

I finally had the chance to read the entire thing and I loved it! Great job :D

[iamhere23]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

wonderful story

[ext_840786]

You did an outstanding job of showing Neal as a teenager, and rewriting all the canon to wrap around that fact. I loved it.

Re: wonderful story

[iamhere23]

I had a great time making everything from canon work in the story. I'm glad my teen Neal turned out alright. I didn't want him to sound childish, but I also wanted to show his vulnerability because of the fact that he's still a boy.
Thank you for reading and leaving such a wonderful review! :)

[youandonions]

YAY!
This whole fic was ridiculously good! Of course I should have been asleep like an hour ago, but I couldn't because I was reading this! Seriously it was wonderful!
I loved the angst and the relationship with Mozzie and Neal and Peter and El and Neal especially. You really are a great author!
Teen Neal is an interesting Neal, and I think you made it even more interesting!
Anyway, thanks for sharing!

[iamhere23]

I'm so glad you liked it. The relationships between all of them are probably my favorite thing in the show, so I tried to balance everything into this story. Thanks for leaving such a great comment! :)

[lilliandragon]

This is such a great story.
Wonderfully written.
I always love the almost father/son relationship Peter and Neal have on the show, but it´s only almost there..
In this story? Spot on!
Very well written!!!
Thank you.

[iamhere23]

Thank you for your comment! I'm so glad I got the father/son relationship to work here and that you liked the story :)

[lomer]

Great story!

[iamhere23]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)