YAY! AN UPDATE! *is ecstatic* Oh how I've missed this fic! The banter with Megatron was fantastic! I love witty Rattrap's comeback to the one's trash is another treasure line!
But what a deep chapter. Dinobot we kind of all had our hints about in regards to his "relationship" with Megatron but Rattrap's past was just as surprising. You just want to cuddle them both at this point.
On that note, Is it bad that I'm on pins and needles for the next chapters? Thanks again! BDQ
Ah, Queen Megs. You never fail to make me want a shower. Or nine.
SERIOUSLY, MEGATRON. THE BEST YOU CAN COME UP WITH IS A SHORT JOKE? I AM DISAPPOINT.
RATTRAP AND MEGATRON IN A BATTLE OF WITS IS AWESOMELY AWESOME AND NEEDS TO HAPPEN MORE OFTEN, FOR IT IS AWESOME.
Also, I think Megatron could read the phone book and make people physically ill. HIS VOICE. IT IS STRONG WITH AN EVIL POWER. And also, it's a shame he's had so much practice ducking Dinobot's eye lasers, because I really want him to get shot
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Oh goodness, why have I not seen this story before? I love this. I love the tiny physical details - how they fit together, how Dinobot's exhale ruffles Rattrap's fur, the blood on Dinobot's muzzle, the curl of their tails - just gorgeous. And it's so achingly, horribly painful, to each have been raped and to try to understand each other and be honest despite how much it hurts to face it.
Thank you! I try to picture each scene as I'm writing it and keep track of all the details in my head, so that I know how characters and objects are interacting. Occasionally my memory slips and something impossible happens, but I re-read like crazy to try and catch those mistakes. It's nice to hear that it's paying off. I appreciate your review. ^_^
I feel for them. Dinobot isn't ready to face his yet, because while he knows what happened, actually admitting it would be (in his mind) accepting up to a loss of honor. So he has a way to go. Rattrap was in denial for years and years before he eventually realized that he was messed up and that his "first time" was part of the reason. He's had longer to come to terms with it is all. (Believe me, he's still in denial about a lot of other things.)
Oh Megatron, you deliciously loathsome purple bastard. I love you so.
I really like your view on Dinobot's past with Megatron, dark as it is. Rattrap's caught me a bit, actually, I've never quite read one like that. Very interesting view. :)
Looks like they're both quite done with all that angst nonsense though. Oh, Grapeface, how your plan did backfire.
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But what a deep chapter. Dinobot we kind of all had our hints about in regards to his "relationship" with Megatron but Rattrap's past was just as surprising. You just want to cuddle them both at this point.
On that note, Is it bad that I'm on pins and needles for the next chapters?
Thanks again!
BDQ
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(Nah, I'm on pins and needles myself waiting to see if they screw it up. :P They could both really use something going right though, honestly.)
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SERIOUSLY, MEGATRON. THE BEST YOU CAN COME UP WITH IS A SHORT JOKE? I AM DISAPPOINT.
RATTRAP AND MEGATRON IN A BATTLE OF WITS IS AWESOMELY AWESOME AND NEEDS TO HAPPEN MORE OFTEN, FOR IT IS AWESOME.
Also, I think Megatron could read the phone book and make people physically ill. HIS VOICE. IT IS STRONG WITH AN EVIL POWER. And also, it's a shame he's had so much practice ducking Dinobot's eye lasers, because I really want him to get shot ( ... )
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I feel for them. Dinobot isn't ready to face his yet, because while he knows what happened, actually admitting it would be (in his mind) accepting up to a loss of honor. So he has a way to go. Rattrap was in denial for years and years before he eventually realized that he was messed up and that his "first time" was part of the reason. He's had longer to come to terms with it is all. (Believe me, he's still in denial about a lot of other things.)
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I really like your view on Dinobot's past with Megatron, dark as it is. Rattrap's caught me a bit, actually, I've never quite read one like that. Very interesting view. :)
Looks like they're both quite done with all that angst nonsense though. Oh, Grapeface, how your plan did backfire.
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GOD.
YES.
Thank you, O Merciful Writer, for the update of this much beloved ficcage. <3
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