In Another Castle

[icaruslived]

Excited Goodbye!     posted by jond, January 18th 3002.

INTERIOR: A clean, unused, small, dormitory. In front of the camera, taking up most of the frame, is a fresh-faced youngster with cropped hair and a Kirk vs Picard shirt. This is JONATHAN, and he is adjusting the camera. Eventually, he is satisfied, and sits back.

JONATHAN:
So. Uh. Sorry

Comments

[itsjustc]

I liked this very much!

[icaruslived]

I'm glad you did! Thanks for reading!

[ohelectricshock]

This was so great! I loved your approach to the topic.

[i_will_not_say]

Oh, this was cool! I liked that Jonathan got a second chance, along with a hopefully more realistic outlook. :)

[karmasoup]

Oh, this delightfully takes me back to my film making days... fun!

[veronica_rich]

How interesting a premise!