Fic: Never To Break You (32) FINAL CHAPTER

[ice_hot_13]

This is finally it - the last chapter!!! Thanks so much for all your amazing comments and for reading through this whole entire fic. I love you guys <3

Comments

[ice_hot_13]

ahahahah I love how everyone's been asking for chase to get hit and everything :D I loved writing that part! I'm so glad the ending held up too <3 thanks for reading!! :)

[letmelovexx]

This was perfect and I'm so upset to see it end. It was a wonderfully thought out story and gave my so many Kevin/Max feels.

[ice_hot_13]

Thanks for reading the whole entire thing!! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D I just love max and kevin so muchhh

[livelifeloud10]

this was amazing. The last line... ugh it was my favorite of this entire series! I just explain with words.

[ice_hot_13]

ahhh I'm glad you liked it! That line was tough :D I thought of it at work and had to write it on my arm so i wouldn't forget it, and just had that while walking around serving hahaha :D Thanks for reading the whole thing!! :)

[lisapy74]

Speechless! This whole chapter gave me chills. I can't believe it's really over. This is without a doubt the best fic I have ever read and if I didn't love Kevin/Max before, I sure as hell do now :D

I almost want to cry because it's over, but I know you'll write more of this pairing, right? :D

Ryan and the threesome joke was hilarious!! :D

I absolutely adored this part: “But he’s here,” Maxim whimpers. “Kevin…”

“Yeah,” Kevin kisses him gently, “but so am I.”

I LOVE how Chase finally gets his ass kicked and how Ryan and Alex join in on it without even knowing who he is. He deserves to suffer so much for what he did to Maxim. But you know, I think Max can finally let it go. He has Kevin. He has Ryan and Alex. He has the team. And he finally believes in himself again. Such a beautiful work you've done here. Just too many feelings for this whole story. Thank you for writing it <3

And the last line just sums up everything so beautifully:
They are the two perfect, fragile pieces of this unbreakable whole.

Perfection <3

[ice_hot_13]

awwww <3 this is so sweet!! I've loved writing this - especially because it's max/kevin and I love themmmm - and I'm so glad you've liked it! Thanks for reading the whole entire thing :D

I'm so happy all that came across <3

Merciiiiii <3

[lisapy74]

It was so obvious that you loved writing this one (such beautiful poetic emotions and angst and drama). This fic is better than any hockey romance book I've read (and definitely steamier). You should really find a way to turn this one in to a novel or a series because it would be AWESOME!! :D How could I not read the whole thing? You had me hooked by the first chapter (no pun intended) :D

Yes, it all came across beautifully <33

:D :D

[ice_hot_13]

Awww :) I'm so glad! That's super awesome to hear :D I really, really would like to! I just have to write the synopsis and a coverletter before I can send it into places - and figure out how to hide hte fact that it used to be about the canucks LOL :D and then to decide if i'd put my name on it D: THE DECISIONS! but it'd be so cool :D

[misskes]

awwwww. That's the first time I have ever read a work in progress and I was not disapointed. Kevin is the best and him and Max are perfect together and I love Ryan and Burr falling in line without even knowing what the deal is. This was soo good but now I'm sad its over. lol

[ice_hot_13]

I'm so glad you liked reading it! Thanks for sticking around for the whole entire thing :D