CM-fic

Aug 16, 2010 11:00

Title: Small Favors and Big Surprises (1/5)
Author: ice_ziggee
Rating: FRC (Fluff)
Pairing: Hotch/Reid.
Other characters (this chapter): JJ, Will, baby Henry.

Beta: holdur I owe you big time, THANK YOU!!!

X-posted at cm_hotch_reid & criminalxminds

Summary: Hotch does Reid a favor.
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Chapter 1 )

sfbs, hotch/reid, criminal minds, fic

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gail19 August 16 2010, 13:34:14 UTC
Nicely done. The character voices are good - this was definitely Reid and Hotch, not just any two guys and a baby. Great job balancing the guys, and not letting Henri take over completely.

Looking forward to more.

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daylyn August 16 2010, 14:28:28 UTC
Utterly adorable. I loved Hotch-to-the rescue, and I loved Reid's conversations with Henry. Hotch's amusement at Reid's dismay was pretty sweet too. That was so, so cute.

(One little thing -- it's "fussy" not "fuzzy" (which you have in a few places)).

Definitely looking forward to more.

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bowie28 August 16 2010, 20:13:38 UTC
That was so adorable. I've always wanted to read stories with Reid interacting with Henry. You did a supreme job. Post more soon. <3

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impulsiveanswer August 16 2010, 20:32:12 UTC
This is so cute! I love your portrayal of Reid with Henry: he doesn't make the baby cry by his presence alone, nor is he super-babysitter - it's a wonderful balance that feels true. I also love Hotch, and how he can poke some fun at Reid's expense while still being encouraging and supportive. Looking forward to more!

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vanessasquest August 16 2010, 22:59:54 UTC
Oh baby fics... and Hotch being all fly-by-night. ^_^ It was sweet.

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