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Sep 13, 2010 13:05

Title: Small Favors and Big Surprises (5/5)
Author: ice_ziggee
Rating: FRAO
Pairing: Hotch/Reid.

Beta: holdur I owe you big time, THANK YOU!!! All mistakes are mine.

X-posted at cm_hotch_reid & criminalxminds

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4

The End )

sfbs, hotch/reid, criminal minds, fic

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cmali September 13 2010, 13:26:41 UTC
WOW!! Fantastic ending, Zig. I thought they'd never pull it together. I love a determined Reid and you displayed him perfectly. Great job and Hot, Hot, Hot. :)

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ice_ziggee September 13 2010, 21:03:44 UTC
Bwahahaha... Had you hanging there for a while ;)

Nobe, there is no other way to end this fic. I made multible tries to continue it but always hit a wall or it didn´t 'sound' right, that is the best place I could think of to stop.

Thank you, for your <3 warming comment.

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daylyn September 13 2010, 13:41:09 UTC
Yay! Together at last! This was wonderful. I love confident!Reid, and I also love vulnerable!Hotch, so this was perfect. I love that Hotch wanted Spencer but still doesn't want to break the rules (that is so very Hotch), yet realized just how important their relationship really is. I loved the mentions of Jack and how Spencer was helping him to laugh and smile. I loved the hotness of it all, but combined with emotional vulnerability. Lovely fic! I always got a huge smile on my face when you updated.

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ice_ziggee September 13 2010, 21:06:25 UTC
Thank you so much for your comment. I´ll never reach your level of writing so this is a big treat.

I´m glad I could at least make you smile on Mondays...

Thank you again.

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daylyn September 14 2010, 05:50:08 UTC
I think your level of writing is just wonderful, btw. You convey such a strong emotional connection. I adore your "convict" world and the intensity of the feelings portrayed there. And I really loved this series too, especially the sweetness of Spencer's relationship with Jack and the realization between Spencer to and Aaron of their feelings. Don't sell your writing short -- I think it's wonderful.

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schnuffie September 13 2010, 13:43:43 UTC

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ice_ziggee September 13 2010, 21:47:27 UTC

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gc_anthem_fan September 13 2010, 17:40:56 UTC
FINALLY! Though, I'm sad it's over

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ice_ziggee September 13 2010, 21:07:31 UTC
LOL. Yes, it´s over. I tried a few times to continue it but always hit a wall, so it´s over.

Thank you for reading, following and commenting.

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impulsiveanswer September 13 2010, 17:45:24 UTC
Fantastic ending to this story! I loved Reid's growing frustration with how Hotch kept backing off and his determination to put an end to it; and it was so sweet how it turned out that Hotch's hesitation was only because he was trying to do things right by Reid.

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ice_ziggee September 13 2010, 21:39:16 UTC
Thank you so much for follwing the whole way through and your comment. I´m glad you like the ending :)

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