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Jun 23, 2012 13:50

Sober[Sequal to ' drunk']
Genre: I’m still not sure.
Rating: PG15 [Language]
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the storyline. Well, technically, I barely own the storyline. I own my imagination.
Length: One Shot
Warnings: Irony and lots and lots of it.
Forewords: So you wake up in a bar and all that you remember is that you called your best friend while you ( Read more... )

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.... danuyel2006 June 24 2012, 05:40:37 UTC
If this is the best you can do, then Wow...
All stories don't have happy endings, but the inference here is that someday Jjong will be able to show Key that he loves him and Key will be able to really, SOBERLY return his feelings... I loved it. You're a wonderful writer.

Thanks for sharing this with me!!

Dani

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Re: .... ichigouruha June 24 2012, 07:44:04 UTC
Aaah once again, you are too kind! :3
Thanks so much for letting me share this with you~ ^______^

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twisted_ream June 24 2012, 20:11:57 UTC
This is really nice! I could feel the atmosphere in the scenes.
If you'd like a beta I could do it although I'm not a native English speaker but close enough :E

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ichigouruha June 24 2012, 21:21:36 UTC
Awh, thanks! I'm glad you liked it :3
And omg bless you for that offer<3 I'm new to this fanfic thing so I've been waiting to come across people who I could actually ask to do this. x)
I actually don't really post fics that much, but I'll surely remember you the next time I start a series or do one-shots (the ongoing fanfic series I'm writing now is to embarrassing to beta lol) ^____^I'm not a native English speaker neither so thass fine with me ahah. You seem to have pretty great grammar! xD
Thanks soo much for your comment~<3

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twisted_ream June 24 2012, 21:24:55 UTC
No problem!
...I have studied the language for all my life so I think I'm pretty good considering I'm not from an E-speaking country.
I sometimes have the weirdest fics going on but fortunately I don't have to publish them! Eventually I might though, just rewriting them completely and it'll be just fine :D

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ichigouruha June 25 2012, 07:44:42 UTC
Haha I encourage you to post them! ^___^ You'll be surprised, I bet a lot of people will like your fics! I certainly didn't expect any readers at all, but people in the Jongkey community (yes, I mostly only post Jongkey xD) are really sweet and supportive~
Your grammar is great, I'd be very very happy to have you Beta my upcoming fics~~~
thanks again!

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chibiyoko June 25 2012, 06:11:21 UTC
Aigooooooooo. There needs to be sequel AGAIN! Because this is just too awesome. ^^
At least Key is back and poor thing. They need to confess and love each other forever. Yes? ;___; I love this story.

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ichigouruha June 25 2012, 07:48:48 UTC
asdfghjkl; you're way too nice to me xD
Thanks so much!<3
I was actually thinking of another sequel and just make this whole thing a three-part story instead of just separate one shots because it'd make more sense that way, wouldn't it xD Again, I'm new to this haha~~
Your display picture is so adorable! x)) That's from an anime, right? The name of the anime slips my mind though ahah
thannnnks for your comment :3

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kerynr June 25 2012, 11:55:25 UTC
Ahh, thanks for the sequel, I loved it.
Although it was not a happy ending, I liked it, because real life is something like this... not always a happy ending. Plus, I can see that someday they will be able to show their feelings to each other. Nice story. :)
Maybe, a sequel again? I want to see their future.^^

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ichigouruha June 26 2012, 02:42:48 UTC
No problem, thanks so much for reading!
Yeah, I'm really not good with writing happy endings~ And yes, it's true that life is not always happy~
But this might end up having a happy ending! ^___^ I just don't have any ideas for a sequel yet, but it might happen~ :D
Thanks again!

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