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idontgiveafaux

The Games We Play

Dec 18, 2007 18:20

Title: The Games We Play
Author: idontgiveafaux
Rating: R
Pairing: Draco/Harry
Prompt: Dysfunctional relationship
Word Count: 750
Summary: Harry does all he can to keep Draco happy
Warnings: (at your discretion) Sexual abuse, Language & Domination.
Notes: Christmas gift!fic for lackofmendacity x
Authors Note: Last line borrowed but modified from the Courtney Love ( Read more... )

Comments 25

lackofmendacity December 18 2007, 19:06:15 UTC

I think I love you ( ... )

idontgiveafaux December 19 2007, 11:55:50 UTC

yay for rant!thesis' (or is that thesis's?) damn you apostrophes on words that end with s!

i'm so glad you enjoyed it hon! i was really hoping you would XD like on dysfunction you've picked up on so many things that i wish i could admit to putting in purposefully but only made sense after you pointed them out *g* although when you asked 'or am i reading too much into this? :/' that particular part was put in deliberately. draco wanted to teach harry that when he complies and does things that he wants, he'll be made love to. when he doesn't (like earlier in the story, when draco wanted an apology for something and harry didn't know what it was), he'll get fucked :)

hee, i do find it a bit funny though that you said the story made you very happy :D

kurla88 December 19 2007, 18:14:14 UTC

The plural of thesis is theses. :D

lackofmendacity December 24 2007, 11:24:41 UTC

I think idontgiveafaux might have been intending it as a possessive term.

And theses sounds quite odd in RL. I prefer to use the phrase 'thesis statements'.

Thread 5

gurliemoviegeek December 18 2007, 19:44:45 UTC

Yes there was hotness here, but more than that there was a very complex relationship. I won't try to break it down, but just know that I really enjoyed reading this. You've got the wheels in my mind turning about what love really is...

I'm rambling now, and I'll stop.

*huggles*

idontgiveafaux December 19 2007, 11:56:34 UTC

*g* thank you so much hon. glad you liked :)

sesheta_66 December 18 2007, 20:06:21 UTC

You really do write dysfunctional h/d very well, and I see Diana is ecstatic! It's always interesting to read what goes on in the minds of those in such an abusive relationship, especially the 'victim' who allows it to continue. Great job.

idontgiveafaux December 19 2007, 11:57:45 UTC

*g* thank you sweetie! ::hugs:: & yeah, i think she enjoyed it, just a little XD

lackofmendacity December 19 2007, 18:43:08 UTC

I am neutral and calm.

As Death Eaters should be. *meditates*

...

*giggles* Right, meditation session over. (I can't keep still for very long. :/)

ratevsrhythm December 18 2007, 23:34:23 UTC

Enjoyed that!

idontgiveafaux December 19 2007, 11:59:03 UTC

thank you!! :D

thrnbrooke December 19 2007, 09:38:20 UTC

I must say you've floored me! They are sooo in character! I can see Draco being this cruel and then when Harry is 'good', Draco being loving. Harry would do anything to keep this love. Though eventually either by force from his friends or his own self worth, I hope he'd leave.

idontgiveafaux December 19 2007, 12:00:10 UTC

thanks a lot hon! :) i think that if harry would ever get away, it would be for his own self worth because now he realises that draco will be good to him if he cuts off ties with his friends, he won't be seeing much of them any more :\