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Mom, I--

[There's a surprised yell, and the sound of someone falling over.]

Mom?!

[This isn't the cave. This isn't the cave, there isn't a small campfire, and her mother and brother aren't anywhere to be found.

...No, this is room with a bathtub, and she's fallen on the floor. She's on the floor, and this is not. Good.Was she kidnapped? Were ( Read more... )

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