[FANFIC] Breath In - Craig/Thomas

[ienvy]

Title: Breath In
Author: ienvy
Fandom: South Park
Pairing: Craig/Thomas
Rating: Borderline NC-17?
Summary: #41 Fixation The Table
Warnings: This fic contains sexual themes. If you chose to read this, you are agreeing that you are legally allowed to view material with adult themes.
Notes: Written for norikumi

Comments

[nerdy_leo]

AHHHHH!

Okay, now that that's out of the way, I LOVE this. Love that their friendship isn't perfect, that Thomas has to wait on Craig. Way to go, dominant!Thomas! I just really love your descriptions and the way you write.

Wonderful job!

[ienvy]

Thank you very much, as always! Glad you enjoyed it. =3

[easilyentranced]

Dawww, Craig! You ruined my porn!

lol, but seriously, I liked it a lot. The awkwardness was so perfect and made this way more realistic, which is what I love. I love how you portrayed Thomas here, too. The puppy description at the beginning made me especially happy. :D

Awesome stuff, dude!

[ienvy]

I know, evil Craig ruined the smut! It made me sad but happy at the same time.

Thank you~<3

[ienvy]

Thank you so much much~<3 I'm glad that you enjoyed it, I was worried about writing it because I wasn't quite sure with how to write Thomas. But I'm happy that it worked out in the end. I'm sad that I didn't get to turn it into smut, though. I just didn't find it very in character for it to happen.

*Craig jerking off with Tweek's blood = win*

<3333

[officenerdgirl]

I misread it and thought it was actually going to be NC-17. Damn. It was still hot, though. ;D

Thomas! God, I love him in this. He just tries so hard, you know? And this:

"Try starting with, 'I like you'."

Sigh. Oh my gosh, Craig. <3

Nice one, Gloomy!

[officenerdgirl]

eta: I meant envy. Sorry. xP

[ienvy]

<3 Thank you very much (and it's no problem~).

I know, it's like... soooo borderline NC-17 and just PG-13, it was hard to decide what to label it as. =/

<3

[ienvy]

<3 Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it~