Comments | ifyouweremine: FIC, You Hit Me Once, I Hit You Back, Kirk/Spock, NC-17

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FIC, You Hit Me Once, I Hit You Back, Kirk/Spock, NC-17

Oct 29, 2009 02:59

Title: You Hit Me Once, I Hit You Back
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Rating: NC-17
Summary: “Your fist hits his mouth and Spock’s bottom lip splits down its supple center, blood spilling glossy across his chin, his head thrown back against the pillow and he gasps, blinking, and you lean down and slot your lips to his”
Word Count: 1,330 ( Read more... )

star trek, star trek fic, kirk/spock, my fic

Comments 33

lady_razzle October 29 2009, 08:21:46 UTC

*dribbles*

stripedpetunia October 29 2009, 08:51:55 UTC

Oh god. And in second-person, even! Oh god.

Can--can we make this thing become a meme? I require more of this.

stripedpetunia October 29 2009, 08:56:40 UTC

Also: you linked me once, I linked you back *cue rimshot*

seneska October 29 2009, 09:01:51 UTC

Oh wow. Uh, I'm going to let my brain reboot now since it seems to have stopped working.

ellethill October 29 2009, 09:42:46 UTC

Holy. Shit. *stares* I may never recover.

Uh, gathering the little bits of my wit that I can find, I have to say that the words/thoughts in brackets were probably my favourite thing - like, for example, this bit - working him over so sweet and patient (in its own way a subtle kind of hurt).

And furthermore- *dies*

therumjournals October 29 2009, 11:04:21 UTC

that was hot and awesome.

love this line: "You dart in and kiss him, then, while he’s still dazed; steal it from him, because you always wanted things you weren’t supposed to have."