FIC, You Hit Me Once, I Hit You Back, Kirk/Spock, NC-17

[ifyouweremine]

Title: You Hit Me Once, I Hit You Back
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Rating: NC-17
Summary: “Your fist hits his mouth and Spock’s bottom lip splits down its supple center, blood spilling glossy across his chin, his head thrown back against the pillow and he gasps, blinking, and you lean down and slot your lips to his”
Word Count: 1,330

Comments

[mcgooglykins]

Jesus Christ. *fans self*

[merelyn]

Wow. I'll- I'll just be. Over here. Yeah.

[candesgirl]

This is the hottest thing I've read in ages, seriously, just...gah. Fucking love it. Hard. Often.

Awesome job. *saves*

[auctorial]

SO. FUCKING. HOT.

Spock always has to have his way, always has to be so in control of himself, doesn’t he?
This made me laugh, because it's so nu!Spock.

I'm not a fan of second-person fics, but you pull it off perfectly here. <3

[danahid]

I *am* a fan of second-person pov, especially when it's well done. Which it is here. It's interesting to me how much characterization you wove into some very steamy description. :-)