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Break Even

Aug 22, 2010 02:09

Title: Break Even
Author:onkeyloves
Pairing: Eunsook/Key
Rating: G
Genre: Romance/Angst
Summary: Ending of a relationship between Eunsook and Key. But they love each other, they really did.

( After she left Kibum, Eunsook felt like a different person altogether. )

author: onkeyloves, fandom: shinee, rating: g, !fanfic, pairing: onew/key

Comments 18

volatileflame August 22 2010, 00:30:02 UTC

so sad T^T
but beautiful at the same time.

onkeyloves August 22 2010, 10:54:38 UTC

Aww, thank you ♥
For both reading and commenting ^^

katrinababs August 22 2010, 01:03:57 UTC

D;
It's beautiful but it's so sad ;__;

onkeyloves August 22 2010, 10:55:13 UTC

I'm sorry ToT
And thank you ^^
For both reading and commenting ♥

heavenlove August 22 2010, 03:36:26 UTC

omo, its so sad!
D=
any sequel to it?

i love the last line! ^^
thanks for sharing! ^^

onkeyloves August 22 2010, 10:56:44 UTC

I'm sorry ToT
Ah, maybe xD
I'm not too sure,
I mean there's not a lot of people who liked it anyway /:
So it'll depends ^^
The last line, is from a song by The Scripts - Breakeven (:

Thank you for reading and commenting ♥

rinni1905 August 22 2010, 03:53:01 UTC

Although I'm not used to Kibum/Eunsook fic because I think Gwiboon is really pretty and so on, I still find this is really beautiful. I don't hate Eunsook for leaving Kibum, there's a limit. Maybe Kibum wasn't someone that Eunsook need. There're so many people we can love, but there's just one person that we need. Maybe Eunsook will feel regret later with her actions towards Kibum, but right now, she's happy, and that matters. No one is right and wrong in this fic, just one that I want to embrace, that's Kibummie ( ... )

onkeyloves August 22 2010, 11:06:00 UTC

Honestly, I am not used to writing this pairing too. It's my first. I usually use Gwiboon/Onew. But I was kind of inspired by Replay, so I though that perhaps I should give this a go ^^ Hmm, I guess you can say that Eunsook was just loving Kibum as a younger brother? I mean, this kind of relationships are difficult to maintain /: Of course. Onew's always the one getting hurt in fan fictions, I thought I should change it. But my heart was aching for Kibum too ( ... )

crazyoverbishie August 22 2010, 06:14:16 UTC

OMG...lately my heart filled with Eunsook..coz my Ultimate-Side-Bias!Onew soul is on a high...XXDDDD

reading this i feel bad for Kibum...>.<...he loves her...and still does...OTL...but Eunsook has her own heart...cant blame her for leaving Kibum...>.<

this is sooooo good>.<...and this is my 1st time reading broken Key/Eunsook...XD

pls do write more...^^ ill be waiting for another GREAT pieces from you^^

onkeyloves August 22 2010, 11:11:53 UTC

Lol, actually I haven't been thinking too much about girl!SHINee because they're hotter as guys to me xD But I don't know, I just felt like using Eunsook in this particular piece ^^

Uh huh, actually we should feel sad for Eunsook too. She doesn't know what her heart wants. It's like, she can't help but feel better when she's with an older guy because it's human instinct to want to feel protected (:

Ah, actually, I only read one before. LOL. It's okay, there's a first to everything anyway xD

Teehee, thank you for your compliments and for reading too ^^
Thank you ♥

crazyoverbishie August 22 2010, 12:56:31 UTC

Really?...actually im in the middle writing one rite now..XD
i was PMSing and a plot rushed to my head begging to be written...XD

But well, i can understand her, she needs to feel protected, too bad she didnt get it from Kibum >.< ...

you''re welcome...XD..you worth my comment and compliments...XD..this piece was so great..XD..i would feel bad if i didnt give my appreciation for you^^