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onkeyloves in ignyte_passion

Talking to the Moon

Mar 13, 2011 22:56

Title: Talking to the Moon
Author: onkeyloves
Pairing: Onew/Key, Onew/Taemin, Minho/Taemin
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance, Angst
Summary: At night when the stars light up my room, I sit by myself talking to the moon. Try to get to you in hopes you're on the other side, talking to me too. Or am I a fool who sits alone, talking to the moon.

( No one knew though, no one really cared enough to find out why. )

rating: pg, author: onkeyloves, fandom: shinee, pairing: minho/taemin, pairing: onew/key, pairing: onew/taemin

Comments 20

slickcaffeine March 13 2011, 15:48:08 UTC

i'm starting to cry ;_; survive, jinki, survive ><

how beautiful it is <3

onkeyloves March 13 2011, 16:02:20 UTC

Aww! Don't cry! ;A;
I realized I didn't mention (someone) called the ambulance, lol.
So...it's up to you to decide if he's gonna survive or not! xD

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment!
It means a lot! <3

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onkeyloves March 13 2011, 16:09:04 UTC

Aww thank you! :D
He's probably just really depressed, idk what he's supposed to be actually hahaha.

At least...they're both dead together?
:~~~; idk. sorry for killing them both!

Thank you once again!
It means a lot! <3

wondering ext_315106 March 13 2011, 16:47:24 UTC

someday over the rainbow i hope see the both of them" dreaming dreamin...."
wah, it is, it's really touching n sad but also lovely.. yes, love sometimes beyond the reality n dreaming...
cry when read this?? Y.E.S bu as long as i can see, if Jinki survive...what will happen to him after that if nobody can't replace Bummie in his heart...
someone looks the same with bummie?? hmmm.........ur story really makes me thinking again n again....

Re: wondering onkeyloves March 27 2011, 16:01:39 UTC

LOL, i didn't really think that deep when i wrote this xD
I just write while listening to the song! well, you can always think of it the way you want the ending to be! hehe!

thank you for reading and commenting! <3

Re: wondering ext_315106 March 30 2011, 01:29:44 UTC

Mianhe for da late reply,cuz actually yesterday i've tried to reply it but my phone's dead.so..^^
i really like ur fic,cuz i'm not an angst reader but when i read it,i can't stop thinkin' it's quite heartbroken moment yet it's beautiful.jinki dubu need his own end,everybodies i think understand..

belintuchiha March 13 2011, 19:45:35 UTC

lol I never accept suicide XD
but onkey is the only exception!
not even death should separate them D: hell naa

haha

onkeyloves March 27 2011, 16:03:19 UTC

LOL, idk why, but i'm always writing on suicides. xD
i just love to kill characters, i suppose! ^^
but yeah, nothing should separate onkey!
teehee!

thank you for reading and leaving a comment!
it means a lot! ^^
♥

rain_yayy March 13 2011, 20:32:53 UTC

ohmygaahhsshh,, I think I'm starting to cryyy
it was soo touchingg

they're together again now,, right?

onkeyloves March 27 2011, 16:04:43 UTC

don't cry!
i feel bad when i write and make readers cry ;~;
but wellllll, since you mentioned touching, i guess it's fine? xD
yupp, they are ^^

thank you for reading and leaving a comment!
it means a lot! <3