anniversary poem in progress

[iheartcorduroy]

So my boy and I are about to celebrate our one year anniversary at the end of this month. I started to work on a poem to give him. It is a free flowing haiku. I have never written in haiku before. I would appreciate any form feedback or just what you think.

Comments

[gadzukes]

that's so sweet!

Miss you, we so need to get together! I moved desks again because apparently we're starting tyro next week, so now I'm back in the middle where danushi was (she's where Steve was)... so I'm accross from Tara.

We all miss you.