Wow, that was a long comment. LMAO. Thank you so much and again, thank you for reading this in pieces as it broke my heart writing it. I'm so happy all the emotions came through and yeah, I'm glad Lionel's dead because he sucks. Poor Ollie. Hahaha, Chloe can't seem to walk away from him, no matter how much she knows she should. There's just something there...and he totally needs her too even if he'd never admit it. They're connected and it's only going to get stronger. *hugs* Thank you! ♥
I love this series! Its one of my favorites! I love oliver with a little dark side. I am so sad he marries tess. I need to reread the original story so i can remember details. I really really really want to read the sequel to the story though, because you have set it up so well!
Aw, thank you so much! I like writing dark!Oliver so I'm glad you're enjoying him. If it makes you feel better, the marriage doesn't last past the second chapter of the sequel. (spolier alert) Again, thank you for the comments. I'm really happy you like this universe. :)
*sigh* oh Ollie. He breaks my heart. I know he's devastated by what he found out and Iknow its killing him. Let Chloe in stupid! lol That's okay I have a feeling she's going to shove her way in and make him listen to her eventually :) Love this series, its so good! This is so well done, love all the details and background information that you give cuz it just makes the story that much better! Wonderful job! Can't wait for the next one!
*hugs* I can't even tell you how depressed I was writing this. It's hard for me to leave him all broken but it's essential for the plot. It seems wrong for me to say that I'm glad he's breaking your heart, but in a way, I am because he's supposed to. Thanks for the comments! I'm so happy that you're enjoying this series and you're right, he totally needs to let Chloe in.
Very good. :) These stories are very good. The relationship between Chloe and Oliver in this AU is very intense and complex, but it seems that something links them, something beyond their understanding. I'm curious to know why Chloe continued to work for Oliver after him marry with Tess. Because after that, I can only find it very difficult of Chloe to see Oliver as someone she can get involved, fall in love. I'm very curious by the development of story. What changes? What does she stand by him? Because it's not only to help the boys, by the project, she would do that any other way... she feels she has something that connects with him and he feels the same.:D But with the marriage, Chloe must have been very inclined to get away from him.
Can't wait for more and by the development of their relationship in this AU and especially to know what will happen when Oliver back and Chloe have known that there is an Oliver the way she imagines.
Well, it's like real world Ollie told AU!Chloe in the original story. Oliver and Chloe belong together in any universe. There is a connection between them; it's been there since that first night in the club. But at this point, Chloe is not in love with him by any means. She is loyal to him though, more loyal than even she realizes and this will be an issue that comes to light in the sequel. Also, if you remember in the original story when Chloe found out from Oliver that her Oliver was "fake" married to Tess, she was happy and said she knew it all along. You'll see Chloe's reaction to the marriage in the next story when it actually happens and I think that might make it a little clearer for you.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm glad that you're enjoying this so much and looking forward to seeing more of how their relationship develops. :)
Aw, thank you so much for the lovely compliments. :) I'm happy you're still enjoying this series. It's been so fun to write but this one was hard because there was just so much pain for poor Ollie. They do care about each other but neither of them is willing to admit that at this point or attempt to make sense of it.
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These stories are very good. The relationship between Chloe and Oliver in this AU is very intense and complex, but it seems that something links them, something beyond their understanding. I'm curious to know why Chloe continued to work for Oliver after him marry with Tess. Because after that, I can only find it very difficult of Chloe to see Oliver as someone she can get involved, fall in love. I'm very curious by the development of story. What changes? What does she stand by him? Because it's not only to help the boys, by the project, she would do that any other way... she feels she has something that connects with him and he feels the same.:D But with the marriage, Chloe must have been very inclined to get away from him.
Can't wait for more and by the development of their relationship in this AU and especially to know what will happen when Oliver back and Chloe have known that there is an Oliver the way she imagines.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm glad that you're enjoying this so much and looking forward to seeing more of how their relationship develops. :)
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