I know I said this last night, but this one is seriously my favorite prequel so far. I absolutely loved the part with Victor and Chloe, because it's good to see where her head is at with the team and I really like how you show her wanting them all to work together but being unsure of whether or not she should spill the beans. My favorite part of this entire thing though, was Tess and Chloe
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Thanks, Cori! ♥ Ha, Chloe and Tess have some serious hate for one another in this universe and that's not going away. And Ollie is totally on Chloe's side and Tess knows that so that just pisses her off even more.
Yeah, Ollie wasn't really a fan of marrying Tess either but he's willing to make sacrifices if it will bring down the rest of the Luthors. He knows he's Chloe's. ;)
Hahaha, yeah...she's the one person who has no problems telling him how it is and that's one of the main reasons he likes her so much. Thanks for the comments!
As usual, this is awesome. I love the little bit with Victor in the beginning, hahaha, he totally got you pegged, Chloe! And I like how all of the characters are connected in this 'verse the same as they are in the "real" universe, so it's pretty great that Tess is around even though this Oliver never got stranded in the island.
But my favorite thing is how you write Chloe and Ollie having such a pull towards each other, even if they [well, mostly Chloe *g*] can't really quite figure out why. It fits the whole mirror-universe thing quite well.
Thanks, Tissa! I love that you enjoy this so much. :)
Ha, Chloe is good but she's not as slick as she thinks she is; at least not where Vic is concerned. I'm glad you like the way everyone is tied together; I didn't want to leave Tess out even if she doesn't come off in the best light in this story...
Yay! I'm happy you like Chlollie. They really do have a connection even though Chloe doesn't get it; she's just not ready to see it yet.
First chapter of the sequel will be posted Friday or Monday. I can't seem to make up my mind. :)
Aw, thank you! Glad you're enjoying it. This is actually the last prequel because this happens a few months before the mirror box switch. But I will start posting the sequel very soon. :)
Wow! Thanks for that! Since it is the last prequel, can I hope you'll be posting the sequel soon?? :) I'm so eager to see how this whole marriage thing will turn out and what was the plan behind it. I think that Victor figured out the truth about Chloe, she should seriously consider telling it all of them. Have I told you how awesome the banners are? I LOVE them!! I can't wait for thr sequel! So excited! :) :)
Thank you so much for the comments! I'm glad that you're enjoying this and that you're so excited for the sequel. As I said, Friday at the earliest, Monday at the latest.
Let's just say the marriage plan doesn't go the way Tess wanted it to at all...Vic definitely knows something and I agree, Chloe should tell them but she's afraid...this is something that will come up once Ollie gets more involved.
The banners are awesome. Juliete is the best. She always knows exactly what I want. Wait until you see the chapter banners for the sequel. :)
This is so great ! I really enjoyed all the interactions and I absolutely LOVED that Oliver is always on Chloe's side :D
These prequels were awesome. You did a fantastic job :) ... and YAY for the sequel coming soon !
Fave lines/parts : “I don’t know how many times I have to tell you this before you get it through your head, but Chloe works for me and only me. You do not get to come in here and try to tell her what to do.” “Chloe is none of your business,” Oliver replied, his tone making it clear the discussion was closed."
“You’re such a bitch,” Oliver replied. “And you’re a jackass but we’re not here to debate personality traits,” Tess replied, irritated."
"If she gives you a hard time, you can still come to me,” he said. “Who do I go to when you give me a hard time?” Chloe asked, raising an eyebrow. Oliver laughed. “You can come to me about that too, but you might not get results.”
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and Oliver really is always on Chloe's side even if she didn't always see it. Seriously, it means a lot that you liked these stories so much. Thanks for always taking the time to comment and leave your favorite parts. :)
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Yeah, Ollie wasn't really a fan of marrying Tess either but he's willing to make sacrifices if it will bring down the rest of the Luthors. He knows he's Chloe's. ;)
Hahaha, yeah...she's the one person who has no problems telling him how it is and that's one of the main reasons he likes her so much. Thanks for the comments!
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But my favorite thing is how you write Chloe and Ollie having such a pull towards each other, even if they [well, mostly Chloe *g*] can't really quite figure out why. It fits the whole mirror-universe thing quite well.
Anyway. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE ACTUAL SEQUEL, OMZ! :D
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Ha, Chloe is good but she's not as slick as she thinks she is; at least not where Vic is concerned. I'm glad you like the way everyone is tied together; I didn't want to leave Tess out even if she doesn't come off in the best light in this story...
Yay! I'm happy you like Chlollie. They really do have a connection even though Chloe doesn't get it; she's just not ready to see it yet.
First chapter of the sequel will be posted Friday or Monday. I can't seem to make up my mind. :)
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I love this Universe and the Prequels
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This news is like a little pre christmas gift
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I'm so eager to see how this whole marriage thing will turn out and what was the plan behind it.
I think that Victor figured out the truth about Chloe, she should seriously consider telling it all of them.
Have I told you how awesome the banners are? I LOVE them!!
I can't wait for thr sequel! So excited! :) :)
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Let's just say the marriage plan doesn't go the way Tess wanted it to at all...Vic definitely knows something and I agree, Chloe should tell them but she's afraid...this is something that will come up once Ollie gets more involved.
The banners are awesome. Juliete is the best. She always knows exactly what I want. Wait until you see the chapter banners for the sequel. :)
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These prequels were awesome. You did a fantastic job :)
... and YAY for the sequel coming soon !
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“I don’t know how many times I have to tell you this before you get it through your head, but Chloe works for me and only me. You do not get to come in here and try to tell her what to do.”
“Chloe is none of your business,” Oliver replied, his tone making it clear the discussion was closed."
“You’re such a bitch,” Oliver replied.
“And you’re a jackass but we’re not here to debate personality traits,” Tess replied, irritated."
"If she gives you a hard time, you can still come to me,” he said.
“Who do I go to when you give me a hard time?” Chloe asked, raising an eyebrow.
Oliver laughed. “You can come to me about that too, but you might not get results.”
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