Victor is awesome, he figured out Chloe's secret (the eye in the sky) and he's making sure she knows it's ok. I understand Oliver's need to take away everything Lex has, and marrying Tess is a part of that. But what happens when his feelings for Chloe interfere with his need for revenge? :) I love this mirror-verse, and I can't wait for the sequel.
Vic is awesome and he's a quick thinker. They really should just tell each other that they know. Oliver's need for revenge is definitely going to take a backseat after the time he spent in the other world. It was an eye-opening experience for him. But he's still a little lost so he might need a push which Chloe will be more than happy to give him. Thanks so much for the comments and I'm glad you're looking forward to the sequel. First chapter will be posted Friday or Monday (at the latest).
This sequel is so wonderful. These pre sequels are totally amazing. Love the way Chloe just don't give a damn about Tess and Ollie supports her completely. Their connection is there, even Chloe didn't realize it yet, but I have a feeling that Ollie feels something already. : D The Ollie's answers about the fake marriage were so vague, and Chloe didn't buy any, and Ollie knows it. Really, how these two interact... it seems they are already a couple,at least in their heads, a very different couple, but a couple... just not aware of that yet. lol Chloe puts Ollie in his place and he likes and let her do this, and she really thinks it's her job to make it, she thinks she has this right... lol This relationship is crazy, totally great, but crazy. lol Can't wait for the sequel, I know I'll love it! Now I will read the story again.! lol
Your icon is always so perfect for these prequel stories. I keep meaning to tell you that every time you use it. :)
Thank you so much for the comments. I'm really glad you enjoyed this and the other prequels. Chloe really has no use for Tess at all. I think Chloe and Ollie both feel something but it's still not quite romantic for either one of them. They're definitely connected and they need each other in a way that neither of them understands. They are sort of couple like without being a couple.
Thank you so much. :) When I read the first prequel for the first time I immediately imagined a scene like that and had to make this icon. :) I imagine Ollie smug, pretending to not understand what she is thinking and Chloe looked at him and saying are you serious? :)
Finally the prequels are all done. THis is the last one right? If it is, then Oliver has come full circle on who he was when he first met him. Now I know why he is like that. Now on to the sequels!
I liked the Victor has figured it out and the Chloe/Tess bit was awesome. My favourite parts were when Oliver asks Chloe to look over the Thompson proposal and also when he tells Tess that Chloe was none of her business. Another part that I absolutely loved was that Oliver would side with Chloe even with Tess being his wife. I really enjoyed this chapter. Can't wait to read the next update :D
I love how you've shown Oliver's progression (or regression depending on how you look at it) and I can now see the "jerk" that AU Ollie is in ELM. He might not have been to an island but he's had his fair share of knocks.
The ELM verse is a FAV of mine because its fun and always puts a smile on my face and eagerly awaiting the sequel.
Tess Queen just doesn't sound right!!! Not worried at all for Chloe she can hold her own against Tess 24/7. Glad she's sticking around and Oliver better be too. Happy writing.
Yeah, that name does not work for me at all. Hahaha. Chloe can definitely hold her own against Tess. Chloe is not going anywhere. Oliver...you'll see. Thanks for reading and commenting. :)
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The Ollie's answers about the fake marriage were so vague, and Chloe didn't buy any, and Ollie knows it.
Really, how these two interact... it seems they are already a couple,at least in their heads, a very different couple, but a couple... just not aware of that yet. lol Chloe puts Ollie in his place and he likes and let her do this, and she really thinks it's her job to make it, she thinks she has this right... lol This relationship is crazy, totally great, but crazy. lol
Can't wait for the sequel, I know I'll love it!
Now I will read the story again.! lol
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Thank you so much for the comments. I'm really glad you enjoyed this and the other prequels. Chloe really has no use for Tess at all. I think Chloe and Ollie both feel something but it's still not quite romantic for either one of them. They're definitely connected and they need each other in a way that neither of them understands. They are sort of couple like without being a couple.
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The ELM verse is a FAV of mine because its fun and always puts a smile on my face and eagerly awaiting the sequel.
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Glad she's sticking around and Oliver better be too.
Happy writing.
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Hope you have a very Merry Christmas and happy Happy New Year too.
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