Man, I'm so behind! While reading this fic, I realized that I apparently missed something lol. Sorry about that - I've fallen behind on fanfic reading lately.
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“I like Tess’s quote about how it was special because it was just the two of them.” Lois snorted. “Like either of them has any friends who would want to witness their unholy union,” she quipped.
I love how you write Lois lol. Poor Chloe - she's taken on one hell of a job with this AU Oliver. I like how she thought he was on drugs again because he married Tess lol. And I am really beginning to see why Oliver trusts Chloe so much in this AU world - she's seriously the only one who's stuck by him no matter what kind of crap he's decided to pull.
Again, great series, very well written and amazing attention to detail (like Lionel sabotaging the boat that would have landed Oliver on the island had he been on it.) Looking forward to the next part! :)
Thank you! I love Lois because to me, she's always the voice of what everyone is thinking, but no one else will say. She has no filter, but she also has a really big heart and wants the best for everyone. She's fun to write.
Exactly. Chloe has always been there for Oliver or tried to, even when he refused help and that's why he was so hurt and angry in ELM because he thought she'd betrayed him, which clearly she would never do.
Thanks so much. Your comments totally made me smile. :)
I really love the AU you have created with ELM. You have done a great job keeping core elements of the characters personalities and making them fresh and interesting in the world. I am really looking forward to the sequels. These prequels have been a great treat and I love that you have Victor and Bart and AC with little cameos. Thanks again for sharing your stories!
Aw, thank you! I'm really glad you've been enjoying them. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. The first chapter of the sequel will be up in a few days. :)
Aww I love Victor! All the JL guys really but I really love Cyborg especially the role he seems to play in your stories. Whether it be as Ollie's closest friend/confident on the team like in Star City Surprise (which by the way is still one of my all time favorite oneshots) Or Like he is in this one just an awesome guy who is trying his best to put Chloe at ease. Seriously more people need to write Victor like you do
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Aw! Thanks, Brittany! I just loved the interaction between Vic and Ollie in Justice. I really wish the show would have given us more scenes with Ollie and the guys like that but since they didn't, I like to write them. And thanks! I'm glad that story is one of your faves. That idea just randomly came to me when I was home on a Saturday night and I wrote it in like 2 hours. I'm never able to write that fast.
I normally like Tess and Chloe as friends better too but in this universe, it's just not possible. Hahaha. And you're right; Tess is very aware that Oliver favors Chloe over everyone and it pisses her off.
Chloe figured it had to be drugs because Ollie marrying Tess makes no sense to her. LMAO. Poor Ollie. He gets addicted to drugs and then everyone throws it in his face. But he's sort of brought that on himself.
Thanks so much for all your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed these prequels. They definitely have a lot to work out in the sequel. I'm probably going to post the first chapter on Friday.
YES!! I absolutely love it when Chloe get to tell Tess off! I've always loved canon Tess even when she was an evil bitch and part of that is because I squee whenever Chloe or Lois gets to snark back at her. This AU chloe is just as awesome when it comes down to giving a good tongue slap and even better Oliver sided with her *\o/*
Ohh and Victor knows more than he's letting on. I loved the dialog between him and Chloe too. I hope she'll soon get the nerve to tell him and the others, that she's the one watching out for them.
I think you've done an amazing job with all the prequels. They really have helped me understand where both Oliver and Chloe comes from and why they act like they do in ELM. It like they went from good to bad to worse to this final nail in the coffin with Oliver marrying Tess. No wonder Chloe has almost given up on him. And I love that you ended the fic with Oliver asking Chloe to trust him. It's like the plea of a drowning man. Utterly amazing and now I really can't wait to see where you're taking them in the
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Thank you! Haha, I always liked Tess whether she was good or bad too and I agree with you; the snark between them was always fun whether it was Chloe/Tess or Lois/Tess. Yup, Oliver is always going to side with Chloe
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first sorry for not commenting sooner but i really appreciate this fic... really enjoy Chloe/Vic talking and then Tess is coming i just hate this bitch and now she is married to Oliver i m glad Chloe made it clear to Ollie that she'll be working for him and only him and he assured her that no matter what nothing will change... he'll always be by her side and i like it ! now i cant wait to read more of this... thanks again for sharing !
No need to apologize, thank you for commenting! I'm glad you're enjoying this. Normally, I would defend Tess, but she is a bitch in this universe. Oliver is always going to choose Chloe. :)
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This made me laugh:
“I like Tess’s quote about how it was special because it was just the two of them.” Lois snorted. “Like either of them has any friends who would want to witness their unholy union,” she quipped.
I love how you write Lois lol. Poor Chloe - she's taken on one hell of a job with this AU Oliver. I like how she thought he was on drugs again because he married Tess lol. And I am really beginning to see why Oliver trusts Chloe so much in this AU world - she's seriously the only one who's stuck by him no matter what kind of crap he's decided to pull.
Again, great series, very well written and amazing attention to detail (like Lionel sabotaging the boat that would have landed Oliver on the island had he been on it.) Looking forward to the next part! :)
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Thank you! I love Lois because to me, she's always the voice of what everyone is thinking, but no one else will say. She has no filter, but she also has a really big heart and wants the best for everyone. She's fun to write.
Exactly. Chloe has always been there for Oliver or tried to, even when he refused help and that's why he was so hurt and angry in ELM because he thought she'd betrayed him, which clearly she would never do.
Thanks so much. Your comments totally made me smile. :)
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I normally like Tess and Chloe as friends better too but in this universe, it's just not possible. Hahaha. And you're right; Tess is very aware that Oliver favors Chloe over everyone and it pisses her off.
Chloe figured it had to be drugs because Ollie marrying Tess makes no sense to her. LMAO. Poor Ollie. He gets addicted to drugs and then everyone throws it in his face. But he's sort of brought that on himself.
Thanks so much for all your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed these prequels. They definitely have a lot to work out in the sequel. I'm probably going to post the first chapter on Friday.
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I've always loved canon Tess even when she was an evil bitch and part of that is because I squee whenever Chloe or Lois gets to snark back at her. This AU chloe is just as awesome when it comes down to giving a good tongue slap and even better Oliver sided with her *\o/*
Ohh and Victor knows more than he's letting on. I loved the dialog between him and Chloe too. I hope she'll soon get the nerve to tell him and the others, that she's the one watching out for them.
I think you've done an amazing job with all the prequels. They really have helped me understand where both Oliver and Chloe comes from and why they act like they do in ELM. It like they went from good to bad to worse to this final nail in the coffin with Oliver marrying Tess. No wonder Chloe has almost given up on him. And I love that you ended the fic with Oliver asking Chloe to trust him. It's like the plea of a drowning man. Utterly amazing and now I really can't wait to see where you're taking them in the ( ... )
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