All the Right Moves 1/10

[ihearttvsnark]

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[ihearttvsnark]

Thanks! Ollie did need the slap; he needed a wakeup call and he will start to get his act together. That was Chloe leaving...

Hmm...I don't write jealous Oliver stories because I don't think they're in character. He's Oliver Queen. He has nothing to be jealous of, especially in this universe where he's even more arrogant than regular!Ollie ever was. But there is a jealous Chloe moment...

[ica013]

**Happy Dance**,

Oh Ollie, still torn between who he thinks he is and who he want to be. This is such an awesome set up for this Oliver's journey. (cause lets face it the other Oliver had to go through the Island, giving up green arrow after finding out about his parents and then roulette thing to get to where he was).

I just love the push pull between Oliver and Chloe, she's trying to help him but knows she can't do it for him.

Fabulous...

[ihearttvsnark]

Thank you! :) I'm glad you like the setup so far. That's exactly it. Canon!Oliver didn't just wake up one day and decide he was going to be a different person. He had trials and setbacks and this Oliver is going to have them too. Yup, exactly. Chloe wants to help but she can't make him change or do it for him.

[danisige]

This will be a turbulent road ... I guessed it already. The chapter is incredible, I was happy for Ollie, at least, not to fire anyone or go crazy, and Chloe has not quit. But their relationship is pretty tense and tricky, and Ollie seems completely hopeless, and Chloe wants all of him fighting along with her. I don't think they know what the feeling one has for the other, how they feel exactly. This still going to give a lot of trouble. But I hope they can understand, that Ollie realizes that Chloe is more than the best friend of his.:) I also liked Lois and Clark fighting about the pizza and delivered for. lol

[ihearttvsnark]

Thanks for the comments! I'm happy you enjoyed this. It really is going to be a rough road for them. Ollie actually handled the initial shock pretty well and then he started to unravel. You're right; they still haven't realized what they mean to each other. Glad you enjoyed the Clois. They're going to have some lighthearted moments in this to balance out the angst.

[renka23]

Yeaaay, love it! :D

I'm kind of glad Chloe did that to Oliver. I mean, come on, he had it coming. But I'm also excited to see how he'll deal it with and how that will change things. Stoked for more!

Oh btw, merry Christmas! :>

[ihearttvsnark]

Aw, thank you! Yes, he definitely had that coming and it will change things. Merry Christmas to you too! :)

[queensil]

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah you posted aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah wait only 10 caps??? *there it have to be a sequel of the sequel already LOLs*
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Aaaaaaaaaaaah ok *runs to read*

[ihearttvsnark]

LMAO. There's always a chance it could end up being longer. ;) Glad you're excited.