Hold It Against Me 3/3

[ihearttvsnark]

Comments

[sxymami0909]

Awwwwwwww! This was awesome, M! I love the ride to the store with Chlollie and how sh thinks she's a beached whale haha that's so her. And I like that she put her foot down with Lois.

Also the plan with the furniture, HILARIOUS! haha and that is absolutely something Lois and Chloe would do. I seriously love the way you write them. You always capture their voices so well. I really loved this story, it's one of my favs! ♥

[ihearttvsnark]

Aw, thanks C! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. Chloe had to take hold of the situation before Oliver lost his mind.

[hawkeyegal]

Bout time Ollie put his foot down....even if he had to be tricked into it! I love the way you write everyone-I was not a fan of Canon Lois but you make me like her. Awesome job!!

[ihearttvsnark]

Hahaha, he had to snap sooner or later. I'm glad you can enjoy Lois in fic. Thanks so much for reading!

[tadashee]

Hahahaha. Lois trying to get super man colors in the baby's room. This was a really cute story!

[ihearttvsnark]

Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it.

[eternal_moonie]

Absolutely LOVE it from start to end!

Well done!!!

[ihearttvsnark]

Aw, thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)

[dreammaker101]

What a sweet story! Loved everything about this chapter -- the Chlo-Lo interaction and scheming, the fact that they knew Oliver so well, Chloe's mood swings, and Ollie standing up to Lois. I even liked Clark even though he technically wasn't in the chapter because he helped Ollie set up the nursery, and he, Chloe and Ollie were on the same side regarding Lois' jewelry store shenanigans. Brilliant! Thanks for posting!

[ihearttvsnark]

Thank you! I'm really happy you enjoyed all of the interactions and even Clark by extension. I appreciate the comments!