[FIC]Enough (G-ri)

[ijiified]

Title: Enough
Rating: R for brief smut
Pairings: G-ri
Summary: In which Jiyong and Seungri are entirely too overdramatic

Comments

[maomao4ever]

flds;afhdsfjasg'jsdlkf
that.was.fucking.amazing.
im fucking speechless.
and how is this kinda crap? u liar-_-
*will be back and leave a decent comment when im actually coherent*

[maomao4ever]

back.
but still speechless...

arghhhhhh
i donno wut else to say but u r too awesome and ur fics rock! <3

write MOARRRR plz?

*obviously still not coherent*

[oxygenlove]

I love you.

[oxygenlove]

So this is the time when I list down the many things that I love in this one. But I just can't type down what they are. So I'll try to go through them in any way that they cross my mind.

I am in love with the way you narrated the story, like a friend is telling you a story. It reads so easily like familiarity. I love how it seems so personal, like I'm involved in it with the way Seungri thinks. How he jumps from one thought to the other. How once moment he's so sure he doesn't like Ji and the enxt he's deny it cause he knows he does love Ji.

Then there's Jiyong's patience. I am in love with how he's just so patient with Ri.

He hisses but doesn't pulls away, takes it without complaint, and the hand that slips into your hair, stroking softly says I'll take it all, take whatever you'll give.This part here just really makes me DHLKAJSKAYEWQILAKJLSJAKS

[oxygenlove]

reading my above comment..
i think it didn't say enough how much I love this one.
it's lacking!

[oxygenlove]

DJSKLDJFKFHKFJKJKJK!!!
ZOMG I AM SO DAMN HAPPY I WUB WUB WB YOU AND THI S FICMDDN!!!!!
ARGH ARGHA RGH

^ Because I think the above comment didn't show how much flailing I did when I saw you posted a new GRi fic.

[robotiques]

Ah, gah. I loved this.
I so did.
The scene, where Jiyong has Seungri pinned to the floor. jnkxcvbxgnntyasbv I just...oh thank you for that. So much.

[parkchoongjae]

The lack of GRI fics lately is really depressing.
So reading this one made me really really happy. :DD

Angst angst and angst. GAAH. I loved the characterization of Jiyong and Seungri here. This is really heartbreaking for Ji but I love how it ended. A bit bittersweet but yeah, they love each other and that's what's important. :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

[bluemonkiesx]

aksjhdaksjd.
if this was "crap", you really should write more crap.
ROFLROFLROFL.

that was freakin' amazing. I love how twisted it seemed.
gah<3