Please proofread my admission essay if you have the time, I'll love you forever if you comment.

[ilakitc4eva]

I am someone who believes that personal growth is infinite. No one can ever reach their highest potential, they can only get better. I am lucky to have discovered this belief early on. I owe it all to my first after school job, a job that has changed my life

Comments

[jollyollyman]

hi kristin.

i commented. do you love me now?

[xangelxeyesx]

oh, k and an i,
how joyous i was to read that.
it was very well put. and written.
ooooohhhheyyyy, lovelovelove.

[adropintheocean]

If I were a college...
I would take that essay over that hiking one any day of the week.
Excellent job.
<3 Rebecca