Comments | iliana_1: Fic: Moments In Time

iliana_1

Fic: Moments In Time

Apr 13, 2011 15:27

Title: Moments In Time
Characters/Pairing: Chlollie
Spoilers: Pretty much everything up till Salvation (9.22)
A/N: A companion piece to Next Time and follows the same canon.

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smallville, chlollie, fanfic

Comments 22

eternal_moonie April 15 2011, 10:45:23 UTC

Absolutely LOVE this story sweetie! So Beautiful and very well written!

iliana_1 April 15 2011, 16:23:24 UTC

Thank you :)

chlarks_cupid April 26 2011, 18:33:12 UTC

This was heartbreakingly beautiful *sniffles*
I mean i loved how you wrote it through Ollies eyes and it was a wonderful and beautiful presepctive.
My fave line: Chloe Sullivan. Bright and brave and broken. Reckless in a way she had never been. But smiling....

This line to me captures Chloe.

I have nothing else to say other than perfect :)
Thanks for sharing and im sorry for the late comment *hugs*

chlarks_cupid April 26 2011, 18:35:05 UTC

She smiled then, the slow sweet smile that lit up her face. The one reserved only for him and he returned it as her fingers tangled in his and squeezed. And just before she leaned in to kiss him, he caught a tenderness in her eyes. Directed at him and it stole his breath. Then she blinked and it was swept away by desire as their lips met.

And this part...this part kills me. Your writing is beautiful xx