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Oct 20, 2006 17:10
i made tator tots in a pan and i am not good at cooking so i heated the oil up too much and it splattered all over. "MEGAN", i yelled "hot oil is flying everywhere!"
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blacknwhitemask
October 21 2006, 16:27:07 UTC
did they taste pretty good?
i really like how you did not simply say "I yelled, 'MEGAN, hot oil is flying everywhere!'".
you may not be good at cooking but you are good at word choice and placement, always.
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illhelpyoupack
October 21 2006, 21:13:08 UTC
:D
they were saturated in oil. flavorless and delicious
haha
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i really like how you did not simply say "I yelled, 'MEGAN, hot oil is flying everywhere!'".
you may not be good at cooking but you are good at word choice and placement, always.
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they were saturated in oil. flavorless and delicious
haha
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