This Nightmare of Mine - Peter Petrelli Fic

Jan 24, 2010 18:16

Title: This Nightmare of Mine.
Fandom: Heroes
Word Count: 364
Rating: PG for descriptions of violent aftermath
Characters: Peter Petrelli
Warnings: If you haven't seen Season 1 of Heroes you might be spoiled.
Notes: Written for Drabble Prompt #20 for heroes_contest

It's a recurring theme every time he closes his eyes )

pg, peter petrelli, heroes contest, fic

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eriksselest January 25 2010, 03:53:30 UTC
Excellent, hon - love this ... it kept me on my toes as it built to the reveal of Future!Peter.

Awesome job! =)

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illusional_you January 25 2010, 05:19:47 UTC
Thank you!

I've been watching S1 again and really wanted to delve into the character of future!Peter. And the guilt that has to be consuming him inside

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brandinsbabe January 25 2010, 09:39:08 UTC
oh wow, i really loved this. the flow was awesome and i love how it turned out to be future!peter.

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illusional_you January 25 2010, 18:06:37 UTC
Thank you so much. Future!Peter hasn't been leaving me alone since I re-watched S1. (I even made him a twitter)

Love, love, love your icon!

THank you for the kind words. I'm my own worse critic

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brandinsbabe January 25 2010, 20:39:08 UTC
ooh what's his Twitter? I love future!Peter too. I was rping him for a while. he's so fascinating!

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illusional_you January 25 2010, 20:45:49 UTC
Scarredboyscout

I really love peter but there were so many of them that future peter really spoke to me because of all that he's been through with the guilt and anger

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paynesgrey January 25 2010, 15:58:38 UTC
Nice! Loved the flow and pacing in this, and it's always good to read some Season 1!Peter. Great job.

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illusional_you January 25 2010, 18:07:18 UTC
Thank you so very much. He wouldn't stop speaking to me so I had to write it. Delve into that guilt ridden brain of his

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sanguinepen January 25 2010, 16:22:38 UTC
Wonderful visuals, my dear. I could feel the pain of his soul and the blistering heat. Brava!

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illusional_you January 25 2010, 18:08:18 UTC
Thank you! It was nice to be able to let my over imaginative brain go and add some visuals to a story.

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darkangel_v January 25 2010, 17:54:02 UTC
This is great!! I LOVE IT!! Way to go girl!!

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illusional_you January 25 2010, 18:08:36 UTC
Thank you! I was so nervous posting it!

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