I'll Love You Forever Part 1

[iluvmaddentwins]

Title: I'll Love You Forever (i know the title sux) Part 1

Rating: Uh...PG-13

Summery: Joel is the new kid at school and has no friends. Until he meets Benji, a guy who Joel meets and they become friends. Then they both discover they're gay and take their "friend releationship" to a whole new level.

Fandom: Good Charlotte

Pairing: The twincest

Comments

[smplplnfan4eva]

Here's a comment!! I loved it! I can't wait for more.

~Shades~

[xxmestuppunkxx]

i just thought i would give some advice. ok,here goes.....
say you want to write "I don't know" well you write it "I don't know. you leave out the other quotation,which is a simple mistake. Another thing,you wrote-"I am, said Joel?....maybe you could make it asked joel instead of said. See people can mistake the comment if you don't have it written right. Also, it went kind of quick, like they all of a sudden loved each other... I'm not saying i didn't like it because i did. I loved it! It had a good plot and i like the part where Benji was running beside the car (very cute!) but still try to edit your work better to be more understandable

ask me any questions or anything if you need help my s/n is gcriotgirl7182 or you can just ask me in my journal
~*sheri*~

Thanks

[iluvmaddentwins]

Hey! Thanks for the advice Sheri!! Seroiusly, I made them love each other too soon. I might write a "new and improved" one. I'll only take out the part where they kiss and shit. Anyways, I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

IM me anytime if you have any questions or more comments about my stories on here.

Peace!

Re: Thanks

[xxmestuppunkxx]

yep....i love to help people with fics...i write them all the time. i just don't post them. so i'll always comment to help!!

[summerbreeze84]

You're invited to join say_anything10. It's a great community and we can really use some members. Take a look around, request to join....don't forget to read the rules!!! Hopefully we'll see you there!!!

Um..

[xneonmoonx]

It's kool that you added me and all, but who are you? Comment on my journal or something and tell me, ok?

Thanx.