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Dec 14, 2004 22:35

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lox December 15 2004, 20:26:04 UTC
i like it a lot
i think it flows very well and you're good at the narrative type of poem

i hope that's not all too true though
cheer up :)

if u ever need to talk im here

.jonnyd

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imaginarylines_ December 16 2004, 00:16:59 UTC
i guarentee it will have a happy ending. [ when it ends ]

i thought about it & well, i guess i do believe in happy endings [ as cliche disney as that sounds ] because if you dont call heaven a happy ending...well then there is no such thing.

so heaven= happy ending :)

thank you jonnnn.<3

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lox December 16 2004, 05:32:55 UTC
trust
heaven is the quintessential 'happy ending'

but that doesnt mean there wont be one here on earth
dont give up all hope. no matter how hard things may seem

just keep on keepin on

-jonnyd

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imaginarylines_ December 17 2004, 01:58:10 UTC
you are correct.

[ dont get me wrong. i love my life, i AM happy, i just wrote that poem to show the difference between how i dreamed i'd be & how i actually turned out. but my will isn't necessaryily Gods will & his is the best. & while i dont always know WHY things are happening or what will come of them, it's his will, so i shall follow. ]

--we're fighting this battle that's already won. but so many casualties are lost along the way--

i'm going to post something dreadfully happy in my next post. DREADFULLY HAPPY. =D

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