Fanfiction: Stay With Me (English Version)

[immorta_beloved]

Title: Stay With Me
Fandom: Viewfinder
Pairing: Akihito x Fei Long
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: not worksafe, graphic sex, a hint of angst, reversed roles (seme!Akihito). No beta.
Spoilers: Naked Truth 10
Summary: after agreeing to the exchange, Fei Long and Akihito spend a last night together in Hong Kong, and Fei Long has a last wish... (set during the Hong

Comments

[max8996]

oh! Your story is so sweet and so sad... and Fei seems so desperate! Poor Fei, he can't win against Asami!
Thank for translation! :))) Nice story!

[immorta_beloved]

Thank you so much for your lovely comment ^_^

Yeah, that was pretty sad... When I write a AsamixFeilong or an akixfei like this time, I always end up writing sad endings, cause I think Fei Long has no space in AxA universe and he keeps on being hurt by being close to them... I hope to write something less sad with a Mikh x Fei or Yoh x Fei ^_^

Thanks again for appreciating it :-) *hugs*

[nbsiren]

Good story ^^

[immorta_beloved]

thank you so much for appreciating this ^_^

[ameris57]

It really is a sad ending. Poor them. Anyway, loved the story. See forward to your next. Big kisses and hugs.

[immorta_beloved]

yes, I'm aware of the sadness into it. That day I just wanted to write angst. I like to read/write VF stories with suffering involved... it's strange, but sometimes I like seing my favourite character psychologically hurt...

BTW thanks for commenting ^_^ glad you loved it! *_*

more soon, I hope! ^_^ *kisses and hugs*

[thegreencloud]

;_;

it's ok, Fei will find someone else eventually

[immorta_beloved]

Yeah, ;_; is the right face... I was in a mood for angst and sad endings that day... even if Fei is my favourite character, Akihito and Asami belong together, and being near them only brings Fei Long more pain, in my POV...

BTW I hope you enjoyed the story, even if it was sad... Thanks for reading and commenting ^_^

[portisheart]

wow. Fei x Aki fics already are a rarity, but Aki x Fei! the first i ever read. as Fei-fan, couldn't miss that one, could i?
ok quite unrealistic, LOL - tho' i remember times where me too i imagined them three together, and Aki/Fei were versatile ^^
(meanwhile, in MY world, only Oro fills Fei Long's heart *_*)
well written, bittersweet. i'll never forgive Aki for turning his back and leaving Fei Long! ^^ even if our lovely Triad leader was, again, a bit manipulative..

[immorta_beloved]

thanks for commenting ^_^ I'm glad you found this good even though this pairing was odd xD
and yes, akihito is unforgivable for that (even though it was me who wrote it xD I hated myself for making our Fei suffer so much xD)

anyway, if he weren't manipulative, he wouldn't have been Fei then XD ^_^

thanks for reading and commenting ^_^ *hugs*