you are my sweetest downfall (i loved you first, i loved you first)

[singyouhome]

Title: you are my sweetest downfall (i loved you first, i loved you first)
Rating/Word Count: pg-13/ 606

One Line Summary: But there's a tiny part of her that somehow thinks, we could work.

Notes: I clearly... I didn't realize I felt this way until this was written. -_-

Comments

[spentnights]

Once again, you've blown me away. Your writing is always so heartbreakingly amazing! I wish I had as much inspiration and talent as you bb!

It's not true: but loneliness is gonna kill her one of these days. And so she let's it. ♥

(and love is nothing really. Just people trying to stick to someone else so they don't have to hear the echo of their own lonely heart) This is perfect!

She cuts away the piece of her that loves him and gives it to him. She can't keep it anymore. I think this is my favourite line, gah. 

[singyouhome]

this feels too much me so i was really afraid about what people would say about it.

it feels so vunerable but i think that's what makes the peice good. *hearts;

and you are so amazing i swear. you're writing inspires me so much.

You're really really talented, love. I swear.

*hearts;

[spentnights]

well it is perfect bb! :) you are far too sweet to me, but thank-you. ♥