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Indeterminable In The Sunlight

Mar 27, 2008 15:18

Title: Indeterminable In The Sunlight
Author: inabasket
Rating: G
Disclaimer: This has not happened.
Characters: Adam Lazzara and John Nolan.
Word Count: 882
Prompt: jingle (for spittingink )
Summary: Adam has always just had this thing for ants.
Notes: Something short and cutesy, mostly for likeanaccidentx, who really likes Adam and John. This is moderately pointless and ( Read more... )

long island, adam lazzara, adam/john, john nolan

Comments 27

lindseylovestbs March 27 2008, 20:55:53 UTC

This was absolutely adorable. Adam's childlike mannerisms were just too cute, and it was nice to read something just playful and lighthearted :)

inabasket March 27 2008, 21:10:50 UTC

Aw, geez, thank you so much. Again, I was worried I made him too childish but. Ants!

lindseylovestbs March 27 2008, 21:23:30 UTC

Haha no, I thought it was so cute.

And I appreciate your John Nolan icons. I'm sitting here trying to think of the correct words to help me elaborate, but I can't. I just enjoy them, haha.

inabasket March 27 2008, 22:56:24 UTC

Thanks again.

...You are a great person, you know that? I hope it's not weird, but the bearded Jno icons just make me think of the word 'classy'. I'm not even sure why. Haha. I am glad you enjoy them.

likeanaccidentx March 27 2008, 21:07:11 UTC

You already know I think this is adorable.
I love how "childlike" [it's the nicer word than what we discussed before] Adam is too... And the subtle details that show what he feels for John? Like the attention he pays and...
This comment is ridiculously pointless; I suck. I'm sorry.

But. But.
The jingling... Awhh, man.
<3
Win.

inabasket March 27 2008, 21:12:27 UTC

You're quick, my friend.
Haha, it's not as pointless as this story. :-| And I tried to be ninja-like, show how they were all subtle-like with their affections. Sort of. I just wanted to write that one long paragraph about the arrangement of the anthils, not going to lie. Ugh, I need to stop talking about myself so much.

Thank you.

wakexthedead March 27 2008, 23:48:48 UTC

This is th cutest thing I've read in a while. And it's not all fluffy, in-your-face, LOOK-AT-ME-I'M-ADORABLE! cute, either. It's just subtle and happy and summery and nice. I like it.

inabasket March 28 2008, 00:29:21 UTC

I'm so glad. I mean, I wasn't really going for anything but that description sounds very pleasant. Thank you, you're great.

goodbyesheesha March 28 2008, 00:35:19 UTC

I had to quote your opening paragraph in AIM, because that just totally got me. Definitely one of those fics that almost makes me angry, because I didn't think of it first.

inabasket March 28 2008, 00:49:06 UTC

Ah gee, that's very flattering. You know, it's always strange to see what other people like in your own stories; it's even stranger to know that there is even something that people can like at all. Anyways, that means a lot -- thanks.

sweetcupcake4 March 28 2008, 05:45:01 UTC

This was so cute,Adam and ants ahhhh I think this is the cutest thing I have ever read and now it's got me smiling just cause it was so cute and happy and I love you for writing this cause it made me extremely happy
THANK YOU

inabasket March 28 2008, 15:13:17 UTC

You're very welcome. (:
I'm glad it was nice and happy for you. Thanks.