Comments | inachan97: Lost in the City Lights Chapter 4

inachan97

Lost in the City Lights Chapter 4

Jun 11, 2011 23:59

~Previously in Lost in the City Lights- Ina got to her new school and dropped off the green container at the nurse's office. Ina then discovered that Daiki goes to the same school. Now there are in math class. What can happen??~

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type: chaptered, author: i, rating: pg-13, subject: hey!say!jump, pairing: daiki/oc

Comments 4

airichan24 June 12 2011, 04:07:39 UTC

*SPOT*

airichan24 June 12 2011, 04:12:48 UTC

Yay!! Ur finally off a hiatus! :DDDDD
Sugoi ne~ The chapter's pretty good but you don't have to have most of the things focus on your diabetes. Maybe some of eth stuff could have focused on your rivalry with Akira or Daiki's conflict with her. I'm not criticizing, just saying.
But whatever, its a good chapter :DD

inachan97 June 12 2011, 04:16:43 UTC

Arigatou. And don't worry drama will occur! ;)

airichan24 June 12 2011, 04:19:17 UTC

Okay, cant wait for the next chapppie! :DDDDD