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savetomorrow August 12 2011, 01:46:30 UTC
Fangirly And Emotional Comment 2.0 (Although Technically 3.0)!

OH MY GOODNESS, I NEVER WANTED THIS TO END. I JUST WANTED IT TO GO ON FOREVER AND EVER AND EVER AND EVER. AND EVER. Then again, the ending is kind of ridiculously perfect, so... GUHH. YOU ARE PERFECT. ♥♥♥

I love how Mark realised the whole love thing - learning the facts of life, Mark! - and didn't want to rush things but also really wanted to kiss Eduardo and and and. I JUST CANNOT. This is all so very lovely. I could cry rainbows all over the desk right now. And I love Chris and Dustin and their epic romance. And I love Eduardo so, so, so much - especially when he's just woken up and his hair is everywhere (best mental image to ever grace my brain at 4 AM). And I love how the Facebook staff thinks Mark's good mood can only be caused by Eduardo or drugs. And I love all the emails and texts.
I BASICALLY LOVE EVERYONE AND EVERYTHING IN THIS FIC. ♥

I shall quote again, because your writing is too beautiful.

“I know.” Chris looks Mark in the eye. “The thing is, Mark, ( ... )

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savetomorrow August 12 2011, 01:47:31 UTC
GOSH DARN IT, LJ.

He’s never admitted it to anyone (and probably never will), but he used to watch the runway lights rushing up to meet the plane as it landed, then squeeze his eyes shut, concentrating as hard as he possibly could, and think: Wardo, I’m here.

I can't even describe how perfect this bit is. I have no words. No words, just love.

THE KISS. THE KISS. THE KISS. It was so, so, so lovely. Mark being so careful with Eduardo, and Eduardo shaking when Mark touched his face... I think all this love might just make my heart explode. ♥♥♥

Yes. I think that's enough rambling for now. It's like 5 AM right now, so, umm, I hope my comments make sense (even a little bit) and there aren't too many typos. I just really wanted to read this and comment before I go to bed.

This is absolutely perfect. And so are you. And thanks again, so much. x ♥

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indecentexposed August 12 2011, 08:12:45 UTC
OH MY GOD THERE'S MORE ( ... )

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indecentexposed August 12 2011, 08:13:48 UTC
P.S. NO, YOU ARE PERFECT. ♥♥♥

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leladancer18 August 12 2011, 01:58:09 UTC
Um, just let me die. I'm hugging my blanket and oh this entire two-shot made me feel all the feelings. Most of which were good.

When he finally kisses Eduardo, it’s like nothing Mark expects and everything he wants, all at once. It feels new and weird and startling and strange, but it also feels really, really right, like maybe this is somewhere they’ve always been headed.

Like something in Mark has always been trying to find its way here, right here, to this.

Yeah so the above line were so great...in conclusion, I loved this and thanks for sharing it.

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indecentexposed August 12 2011, 07:55:56 UTC
*hugs you* thank you so much-- i'm so glad you enjoyed this! thanks for reading! ♥

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uniqlos August 12 2011, 02:41:42 UTC
He’s never admitted it to anyone (and probably never will), but he used to watch the runway lights rushing up to meet the plane as it landed, then squeeze his eyes shut, concentrating as hard as he possibly could, and think: Wardo, I’m here.

Which was stupid, because Eduardo hadn’t been speaking to him then, and would probably have continued refusing to speak to him even if Mark had suddenly developed actual psychic abilities.

MARK Y R U SO ADORABLE. anyhow in my mind, wardo totally heard it lulz.

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indecentexposed August 12 2011, 07:56:59 UTC
HE WOULD NOT STOP BEING ADORABLE. I COULDN'T HELP IT.

thank you so much for reading & taking the time to comment! ♥

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meresy August 12 2011, 03:09:56 UTC
asdfghj. My HEART. *misty-eyed*

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indecentexposed August 12 2011, 07:57:17 UTC
*hug* thank you for reading! ♥

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indecentexposed August 12 2011, 12:24:41 UTC
so glad you enjoyed it, bb! ♥ and delighted that you liked chris & dustin, as they basically write themselves, ship themselves, and i seriously have NOTHING to do with it. thank you! ♥♥♥

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