[bsg fic] Effortless, K/L, R, 1/1

May 18, 2007 00:55

Title: Effortless
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Rating: R
Words: 3,253
Spoilers: through S3 finale
Summary: I have no faith left, Kara, except in you.
Disclaimer: These characters are just as fictional as Kara and Lee. If only they were mine.

Birthday fic for my dear wisteria_! Many bionic hugs to you, hon. It's a little slapdash, but I hope it's at least partly ( Read more... )

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bop_radar May 18 2007, 06:33:13 UTC
Ohh, I love the ending! *g*

And I really love this moment:
her thumb seeks out the small, circular scar that they both know is there
Such intimacy!

she snaps the manacle onto him and then the other on her own wrist
I can imagine them doing this. It's within both their natures to make this statement, and enjoy doing so.

I also forgot to say how much I loved the rain falling in the night--I love rain and associate it with peace and contentment, so the idea of them coccooned with each other in the rain is really satisfying.

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indigo419 May 18 2007, 16:09:56 UTC
thanks for everything, K! I couldn't have pulled it off without you!!

So glad the ending works for you! It's a little goofy, but hopefully "pilot-y goofy," as Alanna puts it!

It's within both their natures to make this statement, and enjoy doing so.

For some reason I have a real kink for pilots making public declarations of love, albeit in weird ways. *g*

I love rain

Me too! I grew up in a house that had what was essentially a tin roof, and fell asleep many a night to the sound of storms coming in and keeping up a steady rhythm overhead. It was very soothing.

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greycoupon May 18 2007, 14:47:26 UTC
wheee! Yay!

That was some nice smut... I am at work. :)

Lovely fic! I love this universe and the Lee POV was great.

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indigo419 May 18 2007, 16:21:50 UTC
Happy it pleased! :0)

I am amused that pilots were naked throughout most of the fic, though actually I was hoping for more hard-core stuff. Porn fairy's a tough negotiator, though! *g*

I could spend a long, long time with pilots on Earth.

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arielmoondance May 18 2007, 17:15:13 UTC
I totally love that they make sure they can not be seperated... ever ... again!!!

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indigo419 May 18 2007, 21:09:36 UTC
hee! Well, it's mostly symbolic, but I like that they've defined themselves as a unit.

thanks for the lovely comment! :0)

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midnightsjane May 18 2007, 20:13:06 UTC
Love it, love it!
Especially the ending..now I want to know what happens after they snap on the cuffs.

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indigo419 May 18 2007, 21:14:44 UTC
Me too! Such a conundrum, one pilot-turned-lawyer and one pilot back from the dead! :0)

thanks - so glad it worked for you!!

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abluegirl May 19 2007, 04:10:14 UTC
*LOVES* :)

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indigo419 May 19 2007, 04:12:25 UTC
thanks! *g* Fun to write it.

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