[fic] Five Times She Doesn’t Want Him; or, Psychological Definitions

Aug 15, 2006 00:24

Rating: R for implied sexual situations
Pairing: Lee/Kara
Spoilers: Not really speculation for S3: I'm just making stuff up as I go along.
Summary: But she’s Starbuck, it would never do to let him see remorse, and anyway she thinks she can make him smile in ten seconds.
Disclaimer: Just playing in RDM's 'verse.
A/N: For
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my fic, bsg, kara/lee

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ragdoll August 15 2006, 06:34:15 UTC
Ooh! *squees* Lovely, hot, moving, beautiful!

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indigo419 August 15 2006, 19:18:03 UTC
*g* glad it pleased!! Pilot!love > everything.

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ragdoll August 15 2006, 19:30:29 UTC
Yes. Pilot!love rocketh! :)

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leda13 August 15 2006, 07:29:05 UTC
Guh.

And... guh.

This structure's the win, isn't it? =) Beautifully written. And I have to say, every one of these could be a much MUCH longer story! *HINT* And all of them gorgeous. But especially the unsaid stuff in Object Permanence and well, all of Displacement. Plus the end is a nice teaser of hot.

Very nicely done!

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indigo419 August 15 2006, 19:24:46 UTC
A two-guh rating! whee!! :0)

It was a fun experiment! And useful for getting unstuck... I stumbled across psych_30 when I was trying to piece this together, and jumped off from there.

So happy you liked it!

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anr August 15 2006, 09:03:26 UTC
oooh. Very nice! I like your characterisations, and the way you sorted the scenes into psychological definitions.

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indigo419 August 15 2006, 19:28:09 UTC
thank you - glad it worked for you! As for the psychological terms... it was fairly easy to slot them in, as probably everyone in the Fleet could use some therapy, don't you think? ;0)

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futurobrillante August 16 2006, 01:25:09 UTC
I love this so much. Oh, pilots. How adorable. And the psychological definitions work so well - both of them could more than likely use some serious therapy... ;]

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indigo419 August 16 2006, 02:59:15 UTC
Yay! I love my pilots...crazy, in-denial, inevitable pilots.

thank you - glad it pleased!!

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jadengreen36 August 16 2006, 02:17:11 UTC
I really liked how you laid it out, and how you illustrated your definitions. And, pilots! Thank you!

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indigo419 August 16 2006, 03:04:13 UTC
*g* thank you for saying so! There's always so much going on under the surface, where pilots are concerned. Glad you enjoyed!

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