Four Times Lee Gives Her a Present, and One Time He Doesn't

Dec 23, 2008 00:24

Four Times Lee Gives Kara a Present, and One Time He Doesn’t

PAIRING: Kara/Lee
RATING: respectable
SUMMARY: Naughty or nice
DISCLAIMER: RDM said it was okay.
AUTHOR'S NOTE:

This is a holiday present for my dearest wisteria_! Unbetaed, because she is my Best Beloved Beta and it wouldn't do to have her edit her own fic. *g* So this is uneven and ( Read more... )

special hell, my fic, kara/lee

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daybreak777 December 23 2008, 09:23:27 UTC
Wow! That was a lovely fic! And the lighter! How'd you do that? How'd you do both?

This was like a gift to all of us. I hope wisteria likes it. It certainly brought a smile to my face. Somehow our two crazy kids are going to be okay. :-)

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indigo419 December 27 2008, 02:11:02 UTC
Whee!! So glad you enjoyed it! The lighter was an epiphany amidst desperation, and the fic - well, let's just say my brain is funny when subjected to pressure. *g*

Thank you!

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wisteria_ December 23 2008, 11:43:24 UTC
Indi! I adore you so much right now! (Well, I adore you always, but especially now.) This is such a marvelous present. Let's see...

One

How perfect that Lee is the type of young man who would feel obligated to buy something just out of courtesy to the shopkeeper. For all her many flaws, in this respect Caroline did raise him right. I like that Kara is so clearly on his mind that he buys it for her on instinct, and that he still can't quite give it to her later.

Two

I love the quiet affection here, especially from Kara who couches it under her "yeah, whatever" attitude. Very fitting for S1 Pilots that she'd immediately take off to go jogging, and that he wouldn't join her (even though he'd definitely want to.)

Three

They really are so great together in the skies. I also like that, despite the stress of the situation, they play this like it's just completely normal for them -- of course he'd save one raider for her, and of course she'd tease him about it.

FourGuns! Ear protectors as a sweet present! ;) Y'know, I also ( ... )

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indigo419 December 27 2008, 02:17:43 UTC
*smooches*

it goes in the unexpected direction

I am so happy you liked your theme basket of a gift! :D This is becoming a tradition, my own personal Yuletide - wisteria_-tide!

*hugs*

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elzed December 23 2008, 14:38:28 UTC
Lovely lovely present (and not just for wisteria, either). And indeed, how you managed to fit babyfic, character death and striptease (with bonus musical) in one drabble is frankly amazing.

Oh, Lee...

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indigo419 December 27 2008, 02:24:31 UTC
with bonus musical

Hee! The part I liked best about writing that bit was that the striptease and baby!fic were all setup! I love to be spendthrift now and then. ;0P Glad it worked for you!

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greycoupon December 23 2008, 15:16:48 UTC

Yay!

Merry Christmas!

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indigo419 December 27 2008, 03:29:44 UTC
*glee* :D

Happy New Year to you!

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rdave1 December 23 2008, 18:58:43 UTC
Wow some lovely moments between our pilots. They are so well written they you can elaborate on them if you like. The last one was so sad.

Poor Lee

Great job. Happy Holidays

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indigo419 December 27 2008, 03:33:55 UTC
There's a universe of unspoken emotion between these two, isn't there?

So happy it worked for you! And best wishes of the season to you, too. :)

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