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[optimus_life]

Here's chapter two, this is fresh off my brain so I apologzie for any mistakes in grammar. My beta(aka my gf) is sick or she would have given it a looking over. Three days of getting this hashed out and my muse can finally rest :)

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[phantom_roxs]

Wow.
This has blown me away.
I love it.
You've Spalko down perfectly and I love how you still are having Indy use the nickname "pup". :)
And poor, poor Mutt. *huggles him*

[optimus_life]

Spalko has proven to be intresting but tricky to write as I don't want to sound cliche. Mutt well Indy has to have his weak point so to speak,something that Spalko can use to her advantage.

You can thank the Discovery Channel for the bullet ants, I had to put them in. The pain index on a bite is a 4, like walking across hot coals with a rusty nail shoved in your heel.

Chapter 3 by weeks end or early next week as school is wrapping up and I've got time now to write. Time and KOTCS on dvd.