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inevitablefict

Coffee and Answering Machines

Jan 28, 2007 21:58

Title: Coffee and Answering Machines
Author: oops_pig
Disclaimer: None of this is real .....
Pairing: Jensen Ackles/ Kristen Bell
Rating: Family friendly for all
Summary: Kristen can't figure out why the smell of coffee reminds her so much of him.
Author's Notes: Written for la_folle_allure so that she doesn't have to kill a man

( She's never thought about him before, ever, and she doesn't even think she'd recognize him out of context, so she's not quite sure why this smell of coffee so reminds her of him. )

kristen bell, jensen ackles, drabbles

Comments 13

misskatieleigh January 28 2007, 13:30:48 UTC

Mmm very nice. I like your description of Jensen - quiet confidence and a bit lonely. And he sort of sneaks up on you with this normalness and then BAM you get this glimpse of how gorgeous he is out of nowhere.

I'd love to see this from Jensen's POV too, or a continuation at least.

(ps - I wrote a JA/KB fic recently for captainfla. You should check it out, I've gotten some good response on it.

~Kt

inevitablefict January 29 2007, 03:52:07 UTC

I never thought about writing this from Jen's POV too, and then as soon as I read this comment I heard his voice in my head - don't you love it when that happens? I certainly do!

I actually read your fic. I'm a hopeless commenter, so I forgot (oops!) But I loved it! Seriously! It was so sweet. Especially the IM conversation and Jen's "crap"s.

winter_dreams86 January 28 2007, 15:38:42 UTC

Ooh, very nice. I thought your voices for both actors was great. And the fact that Kristen associates Jensen with coffee was a nice touch. *adds to memories*

inevitablefict January 29 2007, 03:52:28 UTC

Aw - thank you so much for reading!

lolitaro January 28 2007, 16:27:52 UTC

Aww...That was real cute! I really enjoyed it :D

inevitablefict January 29 2007, 03:52:54 UTC

Thank you very much!

evoque January 28 2007, 17:17:57 UTC

This is a charming, gorgeous little piece. Write more, please!

inevitablefict January 29 2007, 03:53:34 UTC

Hehe - I'll try. I've actually started a companion piece in Jensen's POV so we'll see how it goes. Thankee

jenskyies January 28 2007, 19:13:51 UTC

Dude, that was gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous. That is indeed a yummy coupling and I like how tentative this first contact is. Little steps that turn into someting more. Very sweet.

inevitablefict January 29 2007, 03:53:58 UTC

Aw dude, you're so awesome. You know you are. Thanks :D