Fic: Foresight

Oct 19, 2009 20:42

Summary: Fairly Morgana-centric, slight angst, multiship. Morgana and Arthur grow up, Arthur and Gwen sneak around, Gwen and Lancelot are unsubtle, and Morgana and Merlin trade secrets ( Read more... )

pairing: gwen/lancelot, pairing: arthur/gwen, pairing: merlin/morgana, pairing: arthur/morgana, fic: merlin, genre: angst

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lepetitarsenic October 19 2009, 20:37:27 UTC
Oooh, this is awesome! I loved the way you alternated back and forth between show-canon, slightly fluffy banter and the more adult tension between Merlin and Morgana, it made for a really wonderful contrast. The banter was top-notch, also. Excellent all around!

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infernallysly October 19 2009, 21:01:49 UTC
Why thank you. Glad the contrast worked for you, and bantering is my speciality. :)

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alizarin_skies October 19 2009, 20:58:18 UTC
Brilliant piece :D The pace and mood between the alternating timelines are just masterfully executed, and the sort of happy ending is just perfect :3

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infernallysly October 19 2009, 21:05:46 UTC
Thank you. I'm having trouble with out-and-out happy endings atm... the angst always seeps in somehow...

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sweet_isa20 October 20 2009, 00:18:39 UTC
Lovely piece, i loved the parallel narrative and let me say your characters and lines were spot on, really, this is one of the best fics I've read.

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infernallysly October 20 2009, 12:21:41 UTC
Wow, thank you!

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neela_barnett5 October 20 2009, 01:27:07 UTC
okay im an arthur/gwen shipper n idk what happened i just decided to read a non arwen fic today...n quite honestly by the time i got to the second line i was like "oh no! i dont know how this'l turn out or how gwen will be portrayed n then i might be sad!" but your fic was amazing!
it was a different perspective, and beautifully written.
i really enjoyed reading it!
tho it did make me a little sad!

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infernallysly October 20 2009, 12:24:04 UTC
I used to sort of ship A/G too... I think they're cute together even if I don't like the way the writers are going about getting them together.

Glad you like it anyway. I've already written a "Gwen and Arthur live happily ever after (sort of)" story ending, so wanted to do it differently this time.

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neela_barnett5 October 21 2009, 01:03:50 UTC
ahhh! really?!
what's it called? i love your writing

btw this is neela_barnett5 im just too lazy to log in lol

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infernallysly October 21 2009, 12:29:40 UTC
It's quite long and A/G isn't the main focus (and only comes in several chapters in), but if you're still interested the first chapter is here: http://infernallysly.livejournal.com/4398.html

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alphabet26 October 20 2009, 01:51:33 UTC
Oh, I enjoyed this. Loved all the snippets, little scenes of it all, and the ending was great. Thanks for sharing.

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infernallysly October 20 2009, 12:24:51 UTC
Thank you for reading :)

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