take tears, make wars

Aug 27, 2008 20:54

remember what it was like to sleep at night ( Read more... )

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libberding August 28 2008, 02:32:26 UTC
<3

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infiniteabys August 28 2008, 05:18:22 UTC
I wrote this the other night when I was totally out of my mind. It's weird to re-read something like this. I'm glad you liked it though :)

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Re: part of your style infiniteabys August 28 2008, 05:19:12 UTC
Thanks for the amazing this th(READ) of comments is amazing ;)

I really appreciate the kind words. Thank you

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dominatrxchick August 28 2008, 18:33:15 UTC
we need to go be insane together one day.

i havent gone to bed sober in at least 6 months.

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infiniteabys August 28 2008, 20:32:49 UTC
What exactly do you mean by sober?

St. Louis is a crazy place.

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poet_for_peace August 28 2008, 18:57:12 UTC
First four lines, oh I can relate. Your style of writing makes your poetry beautifully dark. I like this a lot =]

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infiniteabys August 28 2008, 20:33:10 UTC
Thanks so much. I guess I'm just a dark person a lot of the times, especially when I wrote this.

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her_dirty_soul September 12 2008, 16:26:50 UTC

I LOVE this! I love your style, your word play, your interjections which flow and stopper at the same time. the fragrments which don't stop and the smooth movement which jilts and jags.

amazing, I really like it!

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her_dirty_soul September 12 2008, 16:27:56 UTC

also, if it's okay, I'll add you via my other journal, jupiter_lies, because I use that more frequently and want to continue reading your posts!

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infiniteabys September 12 2008, 20:58:26 UTC
Thank you so much. I really appreciate the compliments. I'm totally adding your other journal back, so we can keep up on each other's work.

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